Saw a very nice sketch with Bastemon from moriizo and asked them, if I can color it.
Somehow I ended up doing a painting of the picture. owo;
It’s just my second try, but I still think I did a nice job. x3
The face was so hard for me and is also the thing that looks the worst. xD
Used herefore the original, more grey colors for Bastemon. (Normaly I color my Bastemon brown)
Sketch © Moriizo
Painting ©
Pikuna
Somehow I ended up doing a painting of the picture. owo;
It’s just my second try, but I still think I did a nice job. x3
The face was so hard for me and is also the thing that looks the worst. xD
Used herefore the original, more grey colors for Bastemon. (Normaly I color my Bastemon brown)
Sketch © Moriizo
Painting ©
Pikuna
Category Artwork (Digital) / Digimon
Species Digimon
Size 775 x 800px
File Size 497.6 kB
Listed in Folders
hum..i really, really don't want to sound harsh with this comment > < you know you're my friend, i tell you the things the way they are, try to notice the mistakes so you can make them better for the next time, improve..and that i really lack of tact for saying the things > <; forgive me if i say something that makes you feel bad :C
there are too many bad things in this picture ;v; you've made far better drawings and colorings than this one. her face is just wrong, the mouth is too high and the coloring between her mouth, nose and cheeks make her look like a really old woman O_O the things of her necklace are floating; there's nothing to keep them together. the shoulders are uneven, her boobs are too round and look kinda hard .w. her belly button is too high too. her nails are very short.
i noticed you're coloring without lines. that's really hard to do, i still can't work that way. i commend you for it c: the coloring itself it's not bad, but it's not that strong and makes the same impact as your other colorings. besides, you need to pay attention on closing the colored parts (hard to explain but, for example, see last part of her belly? the skin color it's going to the left while in the upper part is straight. you have to keep the same line). the gray parts of her arms aren't just a line, it's fur c: where is the purple thing that covers her face btw? xD
hope you won't hate me for this. i really want you to be a great artist (you already are a very good one <3) and just want to point out the mistakes so you can fix them/keep them in mind for your next works. try coloring with the lineart first and then remove the lines and fix the colored parts c: that's a good idea to practice coloring without lines (or at least that's how i've seen some artists do)
see ya ; ;
there are too many bad things in this picture ;v; you've made far better drawings and colorings than this one. her face is just wrong, the mouth is too high and the coloring between her mouth, nose and cheeks make her look like a really old woman O_O the things of her necklace are floating; there's nothing to keep them together. the shoulders are uneven, her boobs are too round and look kinda hard .w. her belly button is too high too. her nails are very short.
i noticed you're coloring without lines. that's really hard to do, i still can't work that way. i commend you for it c: the coloring itself it's not bad, but it's not that strong and makes the same impact as your other colorings. besides, you need to pay attention on closing the colored parts (hard to explain but, for example, see last part of her belly? the skin color it's going to the left while in the upper part is straight. you have to keep the same line). the gray parts of her arms aren't just a line, it's fur c: where is the purple thing that covers her face btw? xD
hope you won't hate me for this. i really want you to be a great artist (you already are a very good one <3) and just want to point out the mistakes so you can fix them/keep them in mind for your next works. try coloring with the lineart first and then remove the lines and fix the colored parts c: that's a good idea to practice coloring without lines (or at least that's how i've seen some artists do)
see ya ; ;
It's totaly okay, don't worry. xD
After all, it's just the second time I do this and it's really something different as when you use Lines.
I must say many of the mistakes you pointed out come from the sketch itself, I hardly changed anything. :3
http://moriizo.tumblr.com/post/81574235549
Of course I totaly ruined the face, because human faces are still very hard for em to color properly. xD
Ah, I get what you mean. xD
Yeah I often tend to color in different directions. =w=
Of course, I know that her arms are fur, but that would include more details and I'm actualy happy I finally finished this, even I'm not really motivated to color. xD
This whole thing took me 5 hours, with normal coloring I need only 1 hour.
ALso the reason why the colors don't look so strong, I didn't searched long for very matching ones.
Nah, I know you just want to help me. <3
And this was just an experiment. xD
Yeah, Mearns from dA gave me very thin lines and with those I coudl have made a painting.
Because with most other lines this is not really possible, because the edges are pixelated and you have many empty parts. :3
After all, it's just the second time I do this and it's really something different as when you use Lines.
I must say many of the mistakes you pointed out come from the sketch itself, I hardly changed anything. :3
http://moriizo.tumblr.com/post/81574235549
Of course I totaly ruined the face, because human faces are still very hard for em to color properly. xD
Ah, I get what you mean. xD
Yeah I often tend to color in different directions. =w=
Of course, I know that her arms are fur, but that would include more details and I'm actualy happy I finally finished this, even I'm not really motivated to color. xD
This whole thing took me 5 hours, with normal coloring I need only 1 hour.
ALso the reason why the colors don't look so strong, I didn't searched long for very matching ones.
Nah, I know you just want to help me. <3
And this was just an experiment. xD
Yeah, Mearns from dA gave me very thin lines and with those I coudl have made a painting.
Because with most other lines this is not really possible, because the edges are pixelated and you have many empty parts. :3
Oh, then you should be interested in those two petitions, if you don't know about them already. :3
http://www.change.org/petitions/nam.....decode-for-3ds
https://www.change.org/petitions/ba.....y-cyber-sleuth
http://www.change.org/petitions/nam.....decode-for-3ds
https://www.change.org/petitions/ba.....y-cyber-sleuth
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