That was a great short story ^^ So sweet

Interesting story! I'm aware that this is your first time writing in a while, and that you describe this as a sketch, so I won't really give critique. What's important is that you're writing, so don't be dissuaded. You're showing a good interest in developing scenes by showing them, rather than telling action. You're not glossing over these details, which is important - just try not to move things too fast! =)

Thanks. I noticed this one was a little choppy. If I revise this, there are several spots where I'd slow things down. Good feedback!

You're welcome! Don't always feel like you have to push action forward relentlessly - trust your readers to be more mature, in that they'll keep reading even if the pace slows down, or things become subtle. Just a general comment (you didn't do it here) but make sure when giving a bit more description or elaboration to not suddenly have a character give information about themselves in their speech that is not natural. An example would be a character announcing calling in speech their partner husband or wife, rather than their first name in order to let the reader know they are married. =)

Thanks!