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my first attempt at animation! <3
please critique ^^
please critique ^^
Category Flash / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 831 x 638px
File Size 794.3 kB
Very nice for a first attempt at animating, lovely run and nice flowy motion. Though maybe loop the run frames at the start once more before sprouting wings, since it loops twice at the end it'd be good to keep that consistent pattern and allows the viewer to take it in a bit longer, not a necessity, but something to consider.
One other thing I can note from it is that the legs and body at the start are very realistically drawn, which is great, but the wings when they appear are quite stylised in appearance, I don't know if it was intentional or not but thought I should bring it up to be something to consider and think about.
Other than that it's great for a first try, hope you keep at it. <:
One other thing I can note from it is that the legs and body at the start are very realistically drawn, which is great, but the wings when they appear are quite stylised in appearance, I don't know if it was intentional or not but thought I should bring it up to be something to consider and think about.
Other than that it's great for a first try, hope you keep at it. <:
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