I screwed around with the mixer, rearranged some things, added more variety to the drums, and speed the whole song up by a bit. For comparison sake, here's the first version.

I'm trying to think of a way to expand it with a bridge, but nothing's been working out so far. This may be the final version. :v

I found the thumbnail in my old photobucket account. It's from an album cover assignment in high school. Ah the memories.~