I'm sure you did your the best at this moment.

Two tips:

1) You don't need rush (draw faster as you can) on drawing (any theme) try make 2 or 3 sketches on paper before draw the final version of the picture.

2) Keep in your mind if you wanna be a good artist try change things on your art to make it better.

Try another softwares to draw the lines and color.

Don't need use the same software to color, put effects and draw the lines (line-art).

You did a good job.

My part of trade will come slower because I'm working, see it on my journal.

ok. Thanks 4 de tips