
Stanislov Wilkosz had everything a competing bodybuilder could've hoped for. Fame, fortune, respect, and numerous awards. But growing tired of all the publicity and attention he seeks out a world where (presumably) no one knows him. He stumbles instead on a rundown gym, where it's harder to discern what's more beaten, the building or those who train there!
This story was originally released in two parts, 'world stepping' and 'Grimtors Muscletorium' They've simply been melded together, reviewed, and had a few things added.
This story was originally released in two parts, 'world stepping' and 'Grimtors Muscletorium' They've simply been melded together, reviewed, and had a few things added.
Category Story / Muscle
Species Lion
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 63 kB
Okay just finished reading this and I have to say nice start. There was some missing words here and there but nothing major.
Let me say that you give nice description to your prose. Especially with that "world jumping" apparatus, I take it that they are a more advanced race than humans.
I'm waiting to see what the whole mystery is that you seem to be leading up with the former gym leader.
Let me say that you give nice description to your prose. Especially with that "world jumping" apparatus, I take it that they are a more advanced race than humans.
I'm waiting to see what the whole mystery is that you seem to be leading up with the former gym leader.
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