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Page 1 of Deviled Ham, a webcomic I'm starting up with the intent of getting to mess around with derpy characters in comic form.
I don't know my update schedule yet but we'll see!
Page 1 of Deviled Ham, a webcomic I'm starting up with the intent of getting to mess around with derpy characters in comic form.
I don't know my update schedule yet but we'll see!
Category All / Comics
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Size 1280 x 720px
File Size 584.3 kB
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It feels kinda squished, I had a hard time figuring out what was going on.
My advice would be to make the page taller, drop that first panel, and fill out the other two.
Hell, just expanding the middle panel panel to fit the whole page, and putting the Devilied Ham recipe in the bottom right corner.
I already like the Squidge's expression a lot, though.
My advice would be to make the page taller, drop that first panel, and fill out the other two.
Hell, just expanding the middle panel panel to fit the whole page, and putting the Devilied Ham recipe in the bottom right corner.
I already like the Squidge's expression a lot, though.
..next panel, drippy ceiling and spatters all over the upper walls and the character sobbing on the floor, hiding under the table?
Damn this looks crispy, and full of action. PLease Please Please keep me in the loop so I can follow this! I have expected you to do comics for years now... and it's.. it's.. FINALLY Come true!
Damn this looks crispy, and full of action. PLease Please Please keep me in the loop so I can follow this! I have expected you to do comics for years now... and it's.. it's.. FINALLY Come true!
I think I'm going to cite lisky on this occasion ... ahem:
"Good thing you weren't making deviled eggs!" *runrunrun*
"Good thing you weren't making deviled eggs!" *runrunrun*
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