That's a nice prologue to start the story off with. The dialog was nice and helped to set the mood for the story really well.

I would suggest merging a few of the one or two sentence paragraphs without dialog in them and giving the lizards a slightly better description if they are supposed to be in the story very often. It just helps to give the reader a better feel for them and their scale.

Still, nice story and I look forward to seeing you continue with this.

First it is an good story .

The german speech is't that wrong but it could be better .

And you only use three vehicles leopard 2 (A6 with L55 / there are much more of other series used ) , Pzh2000 and the Fuchs .
Here are some other vehicles you can use Marder , M109 , Wiesel (1and2) and Puma .

Yeah I could have used more vehicles. But there is a logical explanation for the lack of a large and diverse task force, which hopefully is properly explained in Chapter 1.

And yes I probably should have used the A4, but the A6 is such a great looking tank, I could not help it.

Thanks for the comment.

Being a newbie here on FA, I've been looking at these arandom stories.

I happened to chance upon yours, and by God, it was an awesome series. Perspective is awesome, and the overall military theme is something that normally excites me.

T took some time reading through all 17(was it 17?) of them continuously, and all I can say is Good read. two Thumbs Up. You have my amazament, Hetzer. hope I can post some stuff on my account for a change soon.

Eighteen now counting the new update. :D

Thank you so much. I am glad to have pleased a newcomer to the site.

If you ever do get some stuff up on your account, let me know, eh? ^_^

Will do.
You just keep coming up with those stories, they make me read once again.

Sounds like a cool opening, an all round interesting battle, cool ^^

what's this about?

I think it's well written and awesome so far. ^^
so how big aliens are we talking about?

To think by the time you posted this I couldn't even read English.
And even if I did I wasn't familiar with the fandom back then.
You've gone a long way with your writting skills. I can tell.

Oh goodness, you're reading?! D:

Heh, yeah, you can see why I keep it in scraps. It is far from a good example of my current writing skills. Six years is a lot of time to improve.

Now I see what Fresh was talking about last night. I look forward to see how this plays out. Even if it is non-canon this is an exciting spiritual predecessor to see how the Invasion may have gone.