Wow this sounds great! If I can just say a few things. As it stands, this would be great for a game. It starts calm, and gets a bit stronger when percussion comes in. But, it seems like the piece should go up another level during that climax. Perhaps add some brass instruments like trumpet and trombone. That might help it take that extra step and then as the climax ends, have the brass decrescendo out leaving you with the orchestra and and percussion to wrap it up. I don't mean to say that this bad in any sense. I just feel that it needs a boost to reach its full potential. In any case, keep doing what you're doing. I love your music

Listened to it again and I do believe that I heard some trumpets in there. Sorry if you did add brass and I didn't notice at first. I haven't been ear trained yet X3

Funny that you would say that because there are no brass instruments in this. At some points it even sounds that there are choirs in it too, even though there aren't. But thanks for the feedback. I'll try to add in those instruments, but I need to think of a melody that can go with the rest if the song... And yeah... not very good with that hehe...

I thought just about the same thing. It needs a little more around the Mid-End range. I kept expecting some sort of bigger sound to elevate it, but it didn't deliver.

I still think it was alright. However as you said, it's missing something to bring it all together.

Decent experimental sound. You definitely caught my attention by saying "Orchestral", cuz I do like that style ^^

However, as I said in my comment above, it was missing something, and feels like it could go up another, if not several, level(s).

Good attempt though. ^^

Hehehe thanks, bro. And yeah I think it needs something like a choir or some brass instruments, but I need to think of a melody that can go with it. I am a big fan of orchestral music, especially those in movies and games. But this style of music is quite tough to make. But yeah I am thinking of a few things to add into this. But thanks for the comment, bro. I'm glad it caught your attention =3

Needs more WUBWUBWUB, and a sick bass drop.

Great job hun
I like that style.
I can imagine this song played in the credits of an adventure game.
Very nice work

Thank you very much ^^ I'm glad you like it =3

Love it bro! Mind if I use this sometime for a trailer?

You can if you want to. Just credit me.

thanks ^^