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In April 2018, new things came to light regarding Justin Carmical. He's been confirmed guilty of some awful acts. Many of us feel horribly betrayed. People now retroactively try to alter any content featuring Justin, or even outright delete it as a form of damage control. I have decided to add this disclaimer.
Back in 2014, we all had no idea about what Justin had done. Back then I merely saw him as an incredibly fun guy, whose videos I liked, and wanted to add him into my comic, to use his fun little "cameo" gag. Now I know that not only was he no saints, he did do some reprehensible things.
I am keeping this as a memento to myself and others, of what he meant to me once. There is no going back to that now, but I do want to preserve this, to remember...
Naturally dedicating the whole chapter to him sounds wrong now, so I guess I'm taking that back now.
It is possible that one day I'll print my comic out. Then I would rework this page, but in the digital state, it shall stay this way.
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Also yeah, 100th page! I really had not planned the end of this chapter to be the 100th page, but funny how that worked itself out, ey?
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In April 2018, new things came to light regarding Justin Carmical. He's been confirmed guilty of some awful acts. Many of us feel horribly betrayed. People now retroactively try to alter any content featuring Justin, or even outright delete it as a form of damage control. I have decided to add this disclaimer.
Back in 2014, we all had no idea about what Justin had done. Back then I merely saw him as an incredibly fun guy, whose videos I liked, and wanted to add him into my comic, to use his fun little "cameo" gag. Now I know that not only was he no saints, he did do some reprehensible things.
I am keeping this as a memento to myself and others, of what he meant to me once. There is no going back to that now, but I do want to preserve this, to remember...
Naturally dedicating the whole chapter to him sounds wrong now, so I guess I'm taking that back now.
It is possible that one day I'll print my comic out. Then I would rework this page, but in the digital state, it shall stay this way.
=================
Also yeah, 100th page! I really had not planned the end of this chapter to be the 100th page, but funny how that worked itself out, ey?
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>> (next chapter)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 690 x 960px
File Size 331.8 kB
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Well despite its flaws I have really enjoyed your comic so far and I am interested in seeing more!
Sorry I never got around to the reader poll. But some quick ideas/suggestions. I like the use of obscure demons and such, anybody can do vampires,zombies,werewolves etc. But I have never heard of um whatever that girl demon Allistair shot. Maybe you should make that a thing, that all the demons are ridiculously esoteric or obscure ones.
Also, maybe you could develop the side characters a little more, give them a little back story and motivation. It doesn't have to be much maybe just what their hobbies are or things like that. I don't feel like I really know most of these characters outside of Keiren and Raph.
Last maybe you should add a female character, from the title Seven pack, I kinda assume the main group will consist of seven and we already have six guys so maybe you could make the last one a girl.
These are just suggestions based on my own preferences and whatnot, so you are free to ignore them completely and do things your own way since it is your comic, not mine.
Sorry I never got around to the reader poll. But some quick ideas/suggestions. I like the use of obscure demons and such, anybody can do vampires,zombies,werewolves etc. But I have never heard of um whatever that girl demon Allistair shot. Maybe you should make that a thing, that all the demons are ridiculously esoteric or obscure ones.
Also, maybe you could develop the side characters a little more, give them a little back story and motivation. It doesn't have to be much maybe just what their hobbies are or things like that. I don't feel like I really know most of these characters outside of Keiren and Raph.
Last maybe you should add a female character, from the title Seven pack, I kinda assume the main group will consist of seven and we already have six guys so maybe you could make the last one a girl.
These are just suggestions based on my own preferences and whatnot, so you are free to ignore them completely and do things your own way since it is your comic, not mine.
Oh and maybe have Keiren finally settle his sexuality issues and just come out as bisexual, since I think its fairly obvious that is what he is. Unless I am wrong in which case disregard this. I just feel you have kinda dragged that one joke on a little too long.
Well that's all I have to say, great job so far and I'm sure you'll get there if you keep at it.
Well that's all I have to say, great job so far and I'm sure you'll get there if you keep at it.
Adavi, I do not mind the poll thing, I have gotten the data I need from it. Also I want to really thank you for following my work, it means a lot to me!
I originally felt like that should be a main element of my comic: obscure mythological beings. As time went on, it fell into the back, but recent discussions with my writer might mean a return to these, with greater frequency at that!
Side characters? Oh right, I did notice that issue, and always intended to give other characters their own chapters where they're get the spot-light, but admittedly it's a bad sign when a character only gets to shine in their respective chapter...
Oh right, yeah the title is "SEVEN Pack" I do want to make the 7th character a later entry, but it's good to keep that in mind. I have a lot of things to take into consideration before bringing in a 7th character, personality is most important, I have such a diverse cast, so whom could be the 7th one without coming off as a last minute addition?
HAHAHA, Keiran's bisexuality is a real thing, it's based on my own experiences in life. I don't want it to be a thing in every chapter, surely not, but I do want it to be a part of Keiran's character. I want him saying it to be a big deal at the right moment, so it won't happen soon, but it'll come! Promised!
I originally felt like that should be a main element of my comic: obscure mythological beings. As time went on, it fell into the back, but recent discussions with my writer might mean a return to these, with greater frequency at that!
Side characters? Oh right, I did notice that issue, and always intended to give other characters their own chapters where they're get the spot-light, but admittedly it's a bad sign when a character only gets to shine in their respective chapter...
Oh right, yeah the title is "SEVEN Pack" I do want to make the 7th character a later entry, but it's good to keep that in mind. I have a lot of things to take into consideration before bringing in a 7th character, personality is most important, I have such a diverse cast, so whom could be the 7th one without coming off as a last minute addition?
HAHAHA, Keiran's bisexuality is a real thing, it's based on my own experiences in life. I don't want it to be a thing in every chapter, surely not, but I do want it to be a part of Keiran's character. I want him saying it to be a big deal at the right moment, so it won't happen soon, but it'll come! Promised!
Why thank you! I try to think that way, it gets my mood up that for whatever my comic's worth, it held its position for a while now.
As for Justin, why not watch one of his videos? This is one of my favorites:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zV0T-_2-VEI
<Don't be confused by the intro, Justin plays 3 different characters in there>
As for Justin, why not watch one of his videos? This is one of my favorites:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zV0T-_2-VEI
<Don't be confused by the intro, Justin plays 3 different characters in there>
Damit meinst du Trauer dass das Kapitel zu Ende ist, oder eher findest du die Dedikation traurig? Ich möchte sagen dass es komplett vorbei ist, aber schon als ich letztens das Video von jemanden gesehen hab wo er "You can play this" gesagt hat, hats mich voll auf Gesicht gehauen weil das ja Justin's Spruch war, und... tja, am Ende des videos hatte er genau wie ich so eine ähnliche Dedikation Justin gewitmet.
Ich bin lange nicht so traurig wie am Anfang, und wir haben ja nur einmal per e-mail gesprochen.... aber es lässt sich nicht leugnen dass immer wenn ich ihm jetzt sehen werde, ich doch daran denken muss dass er jetzt nicht mehr da ist und ich nichts mehr neues vom ihm sehen werde, und da werde ich schon etwas trauriger.
Ich bin lange nicht so traurig wie am Anfang, und wir haben ja nur einmal per e-mail gesprochen.... aber es lässt sich nicht leugnen dass immer wenn ich ihm jetzt sehen werde, ich doch daran denken muss dass er jetzt nicht mehr da ist und ich nichts mehr neues vom ihm sehen werde, und da werde ich schon etwas trauriger.
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