This is a possible cover for Chapter 1 of Battle Holiday. What do you guys think? Suggestions? I'm all ears.
Category Designs / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 850 x 1100px
File Size 227.7 kB
hmmm if it were my cover I'd combin 1,4,6,and 7. I love the 4th fram were all the characters are like agggh, I'd make it bigger and up at the top, and have fram 1 and 7 be low, and have the cool brown bunny dude in the forground takeing up alot of the page (only if hes the main character)
I like it. It's immediately gripping and different. It doesn't strike me as 'Grand Theft Auto' at all. The boxes, colors, and just content are so separate that I didn't even draw the connection until it was mentioned. It tells your audience exactly what to expect (chaos, awesomeness, in a pulp manga comic form). I'd buy it.
I'm not sure I like the naked bunny on the side, though. It seems a bit... off color. It might keep some readers away. Not like 'OMG naked, my children' away, but more 'furry porn... great' away. You need something else there, something funny. Maybe if you continued the top rabbit's panel down through there, but kept it separated. It would be weird and funny at the same time, and he's already got the surprised expression for it. Just a suggestion, since everybody else is throwin' them out there.
It does seem to suggest an 'anthology' though. I think this cover would only work if you put it in front of A LOT of content, which I know you have
I'm not sure I like the naked bunny on the side, though. It seems a bit... off color. It might keep some readers away. Not like 'OMG naked, my children' away, but more 'furry porn... great' away. You need something else there, something funny. Maybe if you continued the top rabbit's panel down through there, but kept it separated. It would be weird and funny at the same time, and he's already got the surprised expression for it. Just a suggestion, since everybody else is throwin' them out there.
It does seem to suggest an 'anthology' though. I think this cover would only work if you put it in front of A LOT of content, which I know you have
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