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Just some thoughts that made me smile. I've found my partner of forever, and I couldn't be happier. <3
Category Poetry / All
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This is really, really sweet! Everything about the tone and rhythm suggests a deep love and true affection. I like how this isn't a static poem as well! I.E., it progresses as a short act. You were very consistent with keeping the theme in check by never straying from positive and loving words. You also focused way more on the "she" rather than the "he", suggesting selflessness. Well done! <3
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