The US Navy suffers a tragic loss in the Pacific.
MINOR CHANGES: Changed the emergency announcments on the ship to be more proper to the navy. This was pointed out by Eddiecanis. (I wish I knew how to provide that nifty link to his profile thing. >.>)
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/eddiecanis/
This one was harder than I thought, as I do not know the layout of a modern Destroyer! I find that describing ground fighting, mainly infantry, is so much easier. =P
For those of you that would like a visual of the weapons, I have links to pictures on page two here: http://forums.macrophile.com/viewtopic.php?t=13200
Also from there, starting at Chapter 3, I now use hyperlinks (Is that what they are called?) to images of weapons inside the story.
Thumbnail Source: http://www.msc.navy.mil/sealift/200.....mitzsunset.jpg
MINOR CHANGES: Changed the emergency announcments on the ship to be more proper to the navy. This was pointed out by Eddiecanis. (I wish I knew how to provide that nifty link to his profile thing. >.>)
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/eddiecanis/
This one was harder than I thought, as I do not know the layout of a modern Destroyer! I find that describing ground fighting, mainly infantry, is so much easier. =P
For those of you that would like a visual of the weapons, I have links to pictures on page two here: http://forums.macrophile.com/viewtopic.php?t=13200
Also from there, starting at Chapter 3, I now use hyperlinks (Is that what they are called?) to images of weapons inside the story.
Thumbnail Source: http://www.msc.navy.mil/sealift/200.....mitzsunset.jpg
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