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This is the first page of a serie of webcomic about friendship and companionship.
Art, characters and story ©
pacopanda
Si lo quieres leer en español:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13859494/
(Support in the correct translation
Uisgebear and 
FriskeCrisps)
This is the first page of a serie of webcomic about friendship and companionship.
Art, characters and story ©
pacopandaSi lo quieres leer en español:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/13859494/
(Support in the correct translation
Uisgebear and 
FriskeCrisps)Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1200 x 1509px
File Size 889.5 kB
I'll point out the more jarring ones.
OK is written slang. Shortening the word for use on programs like Skype. OK should be "okay."
Coming is spelt with one 'm' not two.
Because the character is being inspired, you would write "it inspires me" inspire is the verb, inspires is the proper tense.
"I thought you would enjoy it too." Enjoyed is the past tense.
The last sentence is wrong and too ambiguous for me to understand. Is he trying to say this is the only place in the new city he has liked?
OK = okay
comming = coming
inspire = inspires
enjoyed = enjoy
The last sentance needs to be reworked.
OK is written slang. Shortening the word for use on programs like Skype. OK should be "okay."
Coming is spelt with one 'm' not two.
Because the character is being inspired, you would write "it inspires me" inspire is the verb, inspires is the proper tense.
"I thought you would enjoy it too." Enjoyed is the past tense.
The last sentence is wrong and too ambiguous for me to understand. Is he trying to say this is the only place in the new city he has liked?
OK = okay
comming = coming
inspire = inspires
enjoyed = enjoy
The last sentance needs to be reworked.
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