Looks good to me. What program[s] did you use to make this

Only Adobe Photoshop CS2 for colouring, lines were made with black pointball pen.

Ok thanks look real good

А я и не знал, что ты комикс рисовала Чтож, получилось отлично!

Теперь, когда ты разобрался с учебой (практически, надеюсь), то можно обсудить с тобой сюжетную линию, если интересно.

До 26-го подожди. Я тогда сдам самые тяжелые экзамены...

Ни пуха ни пера!=^__~=

К ЧЕРТУ!

Hey, in tags of both pages you've forgotten to add species "otter" =P

Er, look on the column, "ermine" is in tags and otter is from the main list of species.^.^''

It escapes my skills of definition to state just how impressed I'm with that undertaking of yours. Creating a comic series is always a tedious painstaking job to do, and you're already past the second page, with every necessary aspect in place ! My respect for your skills have just hopped a tad higher ;3

The setting in which the comic takes plce would be very interesting to know more about: it's timeline, relation to our world, if it's driven by realistic laws and tendencies or affected by the humour in some degree, is technology or magic prevailing in this world, why has this siege started and what are the battling sides of the conflict - it's all a huge want-to-know bundle.

Now, for the comic itself: since textual limits of the graphic novel are quite strict, it helps a bunch to be borderline-concise and brief about anything not directly involved in the plot, for no matter how convenient it is for massive speech-bubbles to take up the space that otherwise would require some art to it, it might make the entire comic look more like a short story and lose it's allure. It's nice to bring the hefty exposition up front, usually combined with the aerial view of the area surrounding the scene - just like you did in the beginning.

As for a bit grimmer and harsher stuff, since you've decided to include your avatar as a chief character, avoid making her a Mary Sue at all costs: Suane must not save the day with little or no effort expended or be loved and revered by everyone, including her enemies, and it's not a mere gesture of modesty - it's preventing a catastrophy that Mary Sues tend to transform whatever they're starring in.

All your characters should be given individual traits, and there's no better way of conveying it than through facial(muzzliar ?) expressions. You've done a fairly decent job in that department, but broader emotive range would be nice for the comic - try exaggerated and blank expressions. As for one instance of what in my opinion could use rectification, the otter's phrase about being lonely contrasts with her expression rather than being aligned with it - she looks more surprised than relieved.

Furthermore, exclude all and any use of a term "furry" in the furry comic. Furry is the mane of subculture composed of human beings with affinity for fauna, and in any world were anthropomorphic animals would dwell, this word would either be offensive or redundant. A pun on this word, however, would slide just fine if used appropriately.

And lastly, if you're serious about the continuation of this series(as I'm sure you are) and you chose to make it in English - find yourself a person with advanced knowledge of this language, because while typos and occasional grammar mistakes won't spoil the brew, the style and the precision of description play a crucial role in the comic metaphysics.

Sorry for the critique that may or may not be sought by you, but these are my thoughts and advices - feel free to use or disregard them. I still think this comic is great as a concept, and it can develop into something very cool.
Keep it up !

Thank you for your comment, I'm glad someone isn't indifferent to my creations.^.^ It's only a first page and I'm planning to tell where and when it all happens. The only problem is to tell about why furries are there, I discussed it with one my friend and there are too many nasty questions. What about grammar mistakes, three furs looked for them and it's a result.xD But I will work more!
It's our world, but won't tell all before I make other pages.xD
What about emotions, I can agree with you, 'cause it's just one moment on the picture and a big amount of text so sometimes they didn't concur with each other.>.<''
I will follow your advices, 'cause haven't experience enough.

I'm by no means a paramaount of heavenly wisdom, so my advices may be flawed.

Just do what you think is right ;3

*giggles* Wise dragon, why not.:P

Creating a comic series is always a tedious painstaking job to do

Not anymore it isn't.

Yikes! ^^"

Looks good to me.

Thank you! =^__~=

A story should never ever ever ever be called: 1) random; 2) furry.
И сиськи делу не помогут :P Особенно несовершеннолетние.
Also, http://www.onlongislandtoday.com/im.....usicaa14nd.jpg

That was the first thought came to my head [-about random, I know it's very silly-]. By the way, I remember scenes in this anime film and it in all, I'm not a fan of it.
Понимаю, что не помогут, и сюжету в частности, но разврата тут стопроцентно не будет, ибо не хочу, чтобы смотрели и читали из-за того, что тут есть чей-либо персонаж или "красная рамка".

А уже есть сюжет хотя бы на 10 страниц?

Настолько примерно и продумано (как раз эта глава), т.к. сначала планировался рассказ, включающий историю нескольких персонажей, но у меня бы получилась чистая графомания. А вот дальше наверное в соавторстве буду рисовать. Ну, и промежуточные эпизоды продумать.