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A poem I wrote and narrated myself. I thought the imagery would be pretty, so I wrote this. It's a little longer than the one I did prior to this, but it's a more romantic theme. I hope you enjoy it.
One word: Calenine.
Dedicated to my love,
Yuki-kedamono <3
OH! Btw! The music isn't mine!
****CORRECTION!!! ZOMG!!****
The BGM track is not Yuki Kajiura's as I previously mentioned. The track is called "Inner Space" from Yasunori Mistuda, composer of much music for the Chrono Trigger/Cross series. Sorry for the confusion. :3
One word: Calenine.
Dedicated to my love,
Yuki-kedamono <3OH! Btw! The music isn't mine!
****CORRECTION!!! ZOMG!!****
The BGM track is not Yuki Kajiura's as I previously mentioned. The track is called "Inner Space" from Yasunori Mistuda, composer of much music for the Chrono Trigger/Cross series. Sorry for the confusion. :3
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wow... the imagry was fantastic. i do remember where this came from.
it was the RP we did where sousuke and yuki first met out in the cold frozen tundra... and he had lost all of his memories of his lover. she was sitting at the mouth of a cave when sousuke passed by.
though i know you didn't forget me in RL, i still felt the pain of my character trying to grasp the fact that her lost dead lover was returned to her from years of pain... only to have forgotten her. (coinciding with my fear of being forgotten)
we never did finish the ending part after he finally remembers and they were reunited with their daughter. one sousuke had never met, and yuki abandoned.
on a note you should see about editing the end bit, because the cut off of music and the dead silence doesn't quiet fit in an it sounds like you forgot to hit "stop"
at first i was thinking romantic as more of a lovey dovey sense, not the immediate true definition of the term "romantic" that one would learn in english class ^__^ so in the beginning i thought the BGM wasn't quite fitting and your voice was too low and sad sounding... but because of the tone of your voice, it added to the mysterious flare to a meeting not predicted in a place nobody would have thought possible by chance.
i love it honey. it brings back memories...
so tell me... about the story i sent you... read it an then tell me if you're willing to do a comic on it... cause when you finish submitting it, i'll submit the story ^__^ so you can get views and comments and watches for the artistic solid viewable portion and i'll get credit for the story itself. ^_^ hows that sound?
*kiss*
it was the RP we did where sousuke and yuki first met out in the cold frozen tundra... and he had lost all of his memories of his lover. she was sitting at the mouth of a cave when sousuke passed by.
though i know you didn't forget me in RL, i still felt the pain of my character trying to grasp the fact that her lost dead lover was returned to her from years of pain... only to have forgotten her. (coinciding with my fear of being forgotten)
we never did finish the ending part after he finally remembers and they were reunited with their daughter. one sousuke had never met, and yuki abandoned.
on a note you should see about editing the end bit, because the cut off of music and the dead silence doesn't quiet fit in an it sounds like you forgot to hit "stop"
at first i was thinking romantic as more of a lovey dovey sense, not the immediate true definition of the term "romantic" that one would learn in english class ^__^ so in the beginning i thought the BGM wasn't quite fitting and your voice was too low and sad sounding... but because of the tone of your voice, it added to the mysterious flare to a meeting not predicted in a place nobody would have thought possible by chance.
i love it honey. it brings back memories...
so tell me... about the story i sent you... read it an then tell me if you're willing to do a comic on it... cause when you finish submitting it, i'll submit the story ^__^ so you can get views and comments and watches for the artistic solid viewable portion and i'll get credit for the story itself. ^_^ hows that sound?
*kiss*
one extra thing though... i don't think you should whisper the end line cause thinking literally... yuki never whispered that to him.... she spoke normally to him... that and it ends the piece a little oddly, and since you are close to the mic, you catch your breath in the line every once n a while.
still really good though ^^ i loved the line "to reveal a golden stare" the most.. haha
still really good though ^^ i loved the line "to reveal a golden stare" the most.. haha
The air hangs thick
and blankets all in sight
pieces, of the sky slowly billowing down
to rest
and with that rest
comes motion
slowly, swerving in and threw the trees
a trail leading to nowhere
lead by an imperfect crystal
warmed with the flames of his will to live
and trough the haze of trees and cold he stops
a sound?
crawling over the floor
like a frightened creature
his warm tail fending the mites of gathering cold
the floors decorated with them
two trees focused to one
ervealing a golden stare
her eyes come to a hault
meeting with the one who's lost his way
haze and cold set in
and like an owl he stares
the crystal showded with imperfection
so was his memory
her (white hot loniless lowered?)
and asked in sorrow
"do you remember me?"
and blankets all in sight
pieces, of the sky slowly billowing down
to rest
and with that rest
comes motion
slowly, swerving in and threw the trees
a trail leading to nowhere
lead by an imperfect crystal
warmed with the flames of his will to live
and trough the haze of trees and cold he stops
a sound?
crawling over the floor
like a frightened creature
his warm tail fending the mites of gathering cold
the floors decorated with them
two trees focused to one
ervealing a golden stare
her eyes come to a hault
meeting with the one who's lost his way
haze and cold set in
and like an owl he stares
the crystal showded with imperfection
so was his memory
her (white hot loniless lowered?)
and asked in sorrow
"do you remember me?"
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