ok, third chapter in to this nice story. fact is I've got alot of folks saying they like this nad teh next one. Anyway, thought I'd go ahead and take an aside to thank two people in particular when it comes to this work. First up on our thanking chop black,

 SpeckledVixen ok, this gal does soem gooddrwaing but this time she did some nic eproof reading. I've tried to get about four or five folks to PR this for me but out of all of them she has been teh most reliabel. sent this all to her and next day it had come back. very nice

 mukichan again a gal with some nice drwaings, fact is shes been teh one faving the chapters so far. nothing helps teh writing process more then knowing someone is reading and liking what you put out. so gotta thank her.

ok, so heres chapter three, all teh other chapters are in my gallery to, so go take a look, if you like them, leave a comment please it would be very nice of you

chp 2

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1389054/