omg you crossed the streams D:
the matrix is destabilizing!!!!

It probably also has to do with something about you spontaneously combusting.

Fu*beelp*k NOW I GOTTA USE MY IMAGINATION lol

so you're saying in the end you'll be on the bottom

Sounds like a possibility.

If you're here to leave critique, please leave it on the artists submission. I'm fine with the work that he's done for me, so please take this elsewhere. Thanks.

was trying to be constructive.

But I'm not the one who drew it. Rebeldragon is.

I understand that. I however am unable to post on his stuff for other reasons. I left my constructive critique here so he'd see it at some point.

also thought it might be fun to talk with you about it too on what you thought of my ideas about it.

Rebel is a starting artist and he's constantly learning and improving his technique. I don't know what you did to get blocked from his page, and I don't really care.
Personally I am fine with the artwork that he has provided me with, since I am the one that paid for it, I personally feel happy with it.
I understand there's a load of places he can improve his anatomy, his line work and what have you. Every artist goes through phases and artists don't improve over night.
It's a steady, sure but slow process, as it is with every artist.

I was unaware of it being a commission. I don't critique commissions publicly. I apologize.

in reference to what you said I improved through critique, as every artist does. I was trying to help. but again, I apologize, this was not the place for this, I believed it was a gift. I will remove my critique.

I fully understand about the healthy workings of critique and how it helps improve artists and what have you, just take into account some artists aren't looking for critique.