
Keepers - Jyn and Marcus - Play Half - Part 2 (WIP)
I'm creating and developing a new RPG to pitch and hopefully sell to whatever video game company will have it. This is a series containing artwork of different scenes from the story, all of which have been done by a very good friend of mine, whose work I respect very much.
This is part of a scene from a later chapter of the story. It features Jyn Vlondett, the main villain of the story. And yes, for all of the admirers, it's a scene of vore. In this scene, he's asked by a little boy named Marcus if he'd like to play with him, and being the only werewolf in his village who eats humans, Jyn is certainly not one to turn down the chance to play with his food.
This one is a work in progress, and the forms are all much clearer than before, the facial expressions are clearer, more present, and noticeable, and color has been added! My friend from NH also gave more attention to Jyn's lips and Marcus's form! And fear not. Unlike my prior hunting scene, I've decided that you all deserve to share the journey from start to finish -- from concept to drafts to completion. So I'm uploading every updated work in progress as this scene goes along.
This is the seventh draft of the scene, and the above panels are part two of what I call the Play Half, as it refers to what happens as Jyn is playing with his soon-to-be victim before he eats him.
So here's the story below:
Panel 7:
As much as Jyn is enjoying playing with Marcus, his laughter ends when, in his point of view, he no longer sees Marcus in his arms. Suddenly, the young boy he is holding is the main object of his ire: Nalan. He laughs and laughs just as merrily as Marcus is, but this does nothing to help Jyn's mood. Upon seeing the young boy whom he has loathed and despised for the last eight years, the warmth and niceness that Jyn was once feeling vanishes instantly. His laughs of pleasure are immediately replaced with a glare of anger and fury. His hatred toward humans has returned once more, and he is now more pleased than ever that he has one in his arms, completely in his power.
Still, he manages to hold himself together and avoid verbally exploding on the small boy, largely because he still has plans for him. . . .
Panel 8:
Jyn is quick to put a smile back on his face, only this one is much colder. It is lacking in the warmth previously shown, as he is now back to carrying out his plan.
He looks at Marcus and addresses him. "Do you enjoy that, Marcus?" he asks.
"Yeah! That tickles!" Marcus replies happily. "Do it again!"
Jyn smiles. "Very well," he says.
Panel 9:
Jyn resumes nibbling on Marcus’s stomach for another minute, with Marcus again laughing happily at the resulting ticklish feeling.
But now, it is neither fun nor games for Jyn, who is definitely no longer enjoying himself, at least not in the same way that he was before. He is now enjoying himself and Marcus in a different way, as he is about to put his plan into motion.
Panel 10:
Jyn briefly stops nibbling on Marcus's belly and plants a long, sloppy lick on it instead, tasting him for a moment. Oblivious to the entire thing, Marcus keeps on laughing, believing this to be part of the game.
Panel 11:
Very much enjoying Marcus's taste, Jyn licks his chops in satisfaction. He grins a huge grin as he pictures the fine meal that he is about to have.
Panel 12:
Having now decided that he is ready to feast, Jyn raises Marcus up to his mouth.
However, Marcus notices this, and right away, he realizes that something is not right.
"Hey!" he yells. "Mr. Elder, what are you doing?!"
Jyn just chuckles sinisterly as his mouth starts to water profusely. "Oh, nothing, my dear Marcus," he responds. "Just having a nice meal — you!"
Marcus gasps in fright at Jyn's reply.
"I just tend to enjoy playing with my food first," Jyn concludes.
Jyn's next meal is about to begin. . . .
This is part of a scene from a later chapter of the story. It features Jyn Vlondett, the main villain of the story. And yes, for all of the admirers, it's a scene of vore. In this scene, he's asked by a little boy named Marcus if he'd like to play with him, and being the only werewolf in his village who eats humans, Jyn is certainly not one to turn down the chance to play with his food.
This one is a work in progress, and the forms are all much clearer than before, the facial expressions are clearer, more present, and noticeable, and color has been added! My friend from NH also gave more attention to Jyn's lips and Marcus's form! And fear not. Unlike my prior hunting scene, I've decided that you all deserve to share the journey from start to finish -- from concept to drafts to completion. So I'm uploading every updated work in progress as this scene goes along.
This is the seventh draft of the scene, and the above panels are part two of what I call the Play Half, as it refers to what happens as Jyn is playing with his soon-to-be victim before he eats him.
So here's the story below:
Panel 7:
As much as Jyn is enjoying playing with Marcus, his laughter ends when, in his point of view, he no longer sees Marcus in his arms. Suddenly, the young boy he is holding is the main object of his ire: Nalan. He laughs and laughs just as merrily as Marcus is, but this does nothing to help Jyn's mood. Upon seeing the young boy whom he has loathed and despised for the last eight years, the warmth and niceness that Jyn was once feeling vanishes instantly. His laughs of pleasure are immediately replaced with a glare of anger and fury. His hatred toward humans has returned once more, and he is now more pleased than ever that he has one in his arms, completely in his power.
Still, he manages to hold himself together and avoid verbally exploding on the small boy, largely because he still has plans for him. . . .
Panel 8:
Jyn is quick to put a smile back on his face, only this one is much colder. It is lacking in the warmth previously shown, as he is now back to carrying out his plan.
He looks at Marcus and addresses him. "Do you enjoy that, Marcus?" he asks.
"Yeah! That tickles!" Marcus replies happily. "Do it again!"
Jyn smiles. "Very well," he says.
Panel 9:
Jyn resumes nibbling on Marcus’s stomach for another minute, with Marcus again laughing happily at the resulting ticklish feeling.
But now, it is neither fun nor games for Jyn, who is definitely no longer enjoying himself, at least not in the same way that he was before. He is now enjoying himself and Marcus in a different way, as he is about to put his plan into motion.
Panel 10:
Jyn briefly stops nibbling on Marcus's belly and plants a long, sloppy lick on it instead, tasting him for a moment. Oblivious to the entire thing, Marcus keeps on laughing, believing this to be part of the game.
Panel 11:
Very much enjoying Marcus's taste, Jyn licks his chops in satisfaction. He grins a huge grin as he pictures the fine meal that he is about to have.
Panel 12:
Having now decided that he is ready to feast, Jyn raises Marcus up to his mouth.
However, Marcus notices this, and right away, he realizes that something is not right.
"Hey!" he yells. "Mr. Elder, what are you doing?!"
Jyn just chuckles sinisterly as his mouth starts to water profusely. "Oh, nothing, my dear Marcus," he responds. "Just having a nice meal — you!"
Marcus gasps in fright at Jyn's reply.
"I just tend to enjoy playing with my food first," Jyn concludes.
Jyn's next meal is about to begin. . . .
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