I really liked the original but i just wasn't 100% happy with it. SO! i went in and redid some details. i am now MUCH happier with it now. also instead of just resubmitting on the original i decided to move it to scraps so the differences can be seen.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1309223 - for those who wanna see what i changed.

it wasn't a lot of changes but just enough to make it much better in my eyes.