Walking along a long, dark dirt road was an older teen. He was looking down, dragging his feet along. He didn’t belong here. No, not to him. He felt hated, it seemed as though no one cared for him, for his thoughts or needs. He was thinking over all of this as he stepped onto a bridge overlooking s deep canyon. He stood there, leaning against the railing, looking out as the sun’s final rays kissed the darkening sky. The human sighed, a tear falling from his right eye as he climbed up onto the railing. He looked down at the ground over a hundred feet below. Then, with closed eyes, he stepped forwards.
Seemingly out of nowhere, a bright green dragon swooped down, catching the teen in his freefall. She hugged him tightly as she landed on the top of the cliff. She then gave his head a quick kiss, before engulfing him in her warm, moist maw. She gave the human a few licks, before gulping, sending him down her soft gullet. She then curled up tightly, nuzzling her belly as her stomach quickly put the teen to sleep. “I care…” She whispered, closing her eyes, a tear falling from her yellow eye.
Thank you dragons... You've saved me so many times...
Seemingly out of nowhere, a bright green dragon swooped down, catching the teen in his freefall. She hugged him tightly as she landed on the top of the cliff. She then gave his head a quick kiss, before engulfing him in her warm, moist maw. She gave the human a few licks, before gulping, sending him down her soft gullet. She then curled up tightly, nuzzling her belly as her stomach quickly put the teen to sleep. “I care…” She whispered, closing her eyes, a tear falling from her yellow eye.
Thank you dragons... You've saved me so many times...
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Sorry if this offends you but the plot seems absurd. I mean why would an unknown dragon swoop down and eat him?*Chuckles* My boy,you're obsessed with vore. Please use it when necessary on your stories based on plots that are logical. Well I hope you don't make this mistake again my boy! I'm literally serious good story though except for the vore part which is absurd and again toodles!
The dragon saviour part is okay to me just only the vore part. If I were a merciful dragon or dragoness I wouldn't do it spontaneously after saving him. Thus, I'll give him more time to relax before I eat him only when necessary or for my hunger satisfaction. And I'm sorry if this offends you I hope my advice will help you making better stories if you understand it.
Ah I'm sorry about that if its personal then I won't criticize. I didn't notice its personal. By the way the story is nice much different than others not to mention I kept that thinking about that type of story (except a bit different than yours) and waiting for someone to submit and there it is. And again I'm greatly sorry for my criticism. Remember to mention certain of your stories are personal if you don't want to,then I'm not stopping ya.
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