Not bad. though there are a few things about vilous/planet Tal you should know. xp

but not bad. ^^

I'm not operating on cannon, I've only read the red chapter, if I translate the others using google translate, I just end up telling myself I can't read it.

XD
Ah alright. ^^


also lemme know if you have a skype there a few things we can talk about the cammon of the story as much as my knowledge go and talk about our chirping peeperburds xp

I don't have a skype, I'm afraid. But anything related to peepers is a must know :3

heh it's a must have. lemme know when you decide to get one ^^

Stumbled across this looking through the galleries of my watchers and found it interesting. The sort of auto biography/journal style is different than stories where you spend a lot of time world building. Not quite as in-depth and "in the drivers seat" as a real time story, but it grants an interesting perspective of the character telling their own life, rather than it being narrated or played in the first person.

And of course it has story and plot to it, which I always look for if the writing is good. It was decent, a bit short, but given the nature of the writing it could easily be a sort of pilot chapter leading into her/your tell of events. If you still write it in any case .w.