This is from a Warhammer 40k RP that I am getting into on the F2F boards here http://www.furrytofurry.com/furry/s.....ad.php?t=53719. Unfortunately I started writing and couldn’t stop so I am temporarily posting it here to show the back story I was working on, get some feedback from the other participants there, and edit it down into a manageable post.
(The last 4 paragraphs are kind of rushed and unfinished; I really had to fight the urge to expand upon them)