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Jordan and Light were fascinated by nature. Was it the leaves swaying in the wind? The majestic mountains? The flowing grass? The awe-inspiring forests? Whatever the case, the two were usually seen hiking or camping in the nearby forest- Volundree Woods. Their parents weren't too worried about them, but every time they went into the woods their parents always seemed nervous. The rumors of foul beings and horrid hauntings did not help to ease their minds.
Not much is indeed known about the forest at all to the two young boys. Exploration of the vast sea of trees always brings a sense of adventure between the two of them as they start looking around for anything interesting that catches their eye! For the two young teenagers, this was the best way for them to be able to have fun without adults getting in their way. In that regard, they fulfill it quite easily as they search every knock and cranny of Volundree Woods. Going deeper than they ever could during this day, not knowing that it is always deep within the forest where the unusual occurs.
"Hey, Jordan! Are you excited about finally going deeper into these woods?" asks Light, whom is currently wearing plain white sneakers with blue pants and a white shirt that matches his silvery hair that is hanging behind his head in a pony tail.
"Of course!" Jordan replied as he blew away a bee from his red t-shirt. "Who knows what we might find? A lost civilization, a giant tree.... maybe even a new species of plant!" Jordan blew away another bee from his shirt. "I bet I look like a plant with all this red on me. It's like shouting, look at me! I'm a giant flower!" With black and red pants, red shoes, and even a red hat to cover his slightly messed up hair, it was clear why all the bugs were out to get him.
"You should have picked something normal like mine," Light laughs as he pushes away some of the bushes, noticing a rather small tree with strange blue berries in the shape of strawberries growing from it," Heey check this out Jordan! I think I found that new plant that you were going on about over here!"
"Wooaah." Jordan was at a loss for words. The tree had all sorts of the strange blue strawberries, and all of them seemed ripe and readying to fall. "What do you suppose they taste like? They aren't any of the danger colors for berries, so I'm assuming they're edible. Why don't we try one out?"
"I think that would be the best way to see if they are good too! Nothing ventured, nothing gained as they say!" Light replies with a chuckle as he plucks one of the berries off and begins to chew them up," The taste of sour and dryness of these berries is really good! They are so juicy too and kind of makes me to wanna eat more!"
"Really?" Jordan replied, eyeing one of the berries in his hand. "Bottoms up!" Jordan threw the berry up into the air and into his mouth. After munching on it for a moment, Jordan smiled. "Wow, those are good! I think we have our lunch Light!"
"Heh, yeah I agree. I think we really have found our lunch!" the white haired young man happily starts to devour the berries before him greedily," I could just eat all of these with how good they are!"
"No way!" Jordan countered as he ate a third. "I could eat more than you easily!" He kicked the tree, and a whole bunch of the blue strawberries fell onto the ground, thankfully without a bruise. Jordan dashed over to a pile and began devouring them.
"Hey! Leave some berries for me!" Light grumbled as he starts to dig into berries.
The young human didn't even notice that his shirt is now starting to ride up his gut as he starts to swell heavily around the midsection with fat. A thick layer of fuzz begins to spread all throughout his body as he starts to dig in further to devour the berries in order to catch up with his friend. There is no way he is going to let Jordan beat him in an eating contest. Light is so blind to the changes that he doesn't even notice the sudden in crease of height towards his body too. He had gained at least a foot in height and a foot in weight around that rather hefty stomach of his!
Jordan wasn't left out of the changes. With every bite and swallow his belly grew larger and larger. As he grew taller fur began to grow from his increasingly exposed belly outwards. With his headstart over Light, the changes were more extreme. Already he had gained at least two feet of stomach, and if you looked closely you could see his arms and legs change shape. Jordan however was too focused on outeating his friend and the delicious taste if the berries. Jordan's hands and legs slowly formed into paws, and as the spreading fur reached his hair it spiked up like an anime character.
Light wasn't easily out done by his friend at all as he finally got upto speed with catching up to Jordan's rather huge lead on eating the berries. Because he is able to catch up with him, the chances that are occurring throughout his body are increasing quite a bit in pace. His shirt rides up quite a bit on his stomach as it increases in size and jiggles about freely in the air, it is completely covered in blue fur, thick and silky smooth, its size more than matches that of his friend. Changes even affect his skeletal stretch as he suddenly sprouts a long slender black tail that snakes its way out of his pants and grows to a rather impressive length, gaining a strange yellow tuff of fur at the end of it that looks like an electrical spark.
"Purrrr... Everything is just so delicious to eat J!" Light replies as his head changes to look more feline, with his hair now black and spiky all over, having a few bangs hanging over his eyes that are now changing into a yellow color with an outer red color surrounding them.
"You know it." Jordan said as he swallowed yet another berry. By now, it was clear Jordan and Light weren't human anymore. With paws for hands and legs, blue and black fur everywhere, and a feline head, the two had transformed into Luxrays! But that wasn't their only change. As the two greedily gobbled the mysterious berries, their bellies grew larger and larger. Already Jordan had just over 3 feet of belly, and it was starting to sag over his somehow-still-on pants.
The two are now drowning within their senses as they get lost with all the food they are stuffing into themselves. It is just so tasty and delicious that it completely overshadows all their senses. It is because of that that the two formerly human boys miss out on suddenly gaining extra pair of limbs! Their legs change to suite the change as they suddenly gain four legs and two bellies at that. Their paws having change a bit, to have black ones in the back and blue ones in the front. Clothes are fully ripped apart, at least for their pants as nothing can be down to hold together their new Taurific bodies. Weight gain is now focusing itself into the new second belly with a gusto, causing it to swell into a big blue dome of soft marshmallow like fat!
Time passed in an instant and yet it seemed to take forever to get there. For the two once humans turned Luxray taurs, the moment was over too soon. By the time the sun began to set, every single blue oversized strawberry was gone, nothing left in the wake of the two's feasting might. Their two stomachs were proof of such; with bellies nearing their immobility, it was amazing they were able to move at all. Still the two were in stupor. The berries effect having not worn off yet, the two reached for berries that were no longer there. However, this only lasted for a moment before Jordan began to snap out of it.
"Huh?!" His slightly closed eyes widened, and became saucers once feeling returned to his body. "What the- WHAT THE HECK?!?" Jordan frantically looked over his new, plump, Luxray taur body. "What happened to me?!"
"What are you talking about buddy?" Light is too busy munching into the bush to even notice the changes that happens to him as his wide blue taur belly starts to heavily lay itself upon the ground!
"Look at yourself!" Jordan said in shock. "Those berries did something to us!" He experimentally tried moving, and awkwardly his body jiggled as he tried to get used to having 4 legs and two large bellies. "Dude, snap out of it! There aren't an berries left on the tree! We ate them all!"
Light blinks as he points to another tree nearby," What about those and whoa look at me! I look good hehe! How can you be in shock over this man? I feel so soft and cuddly right now! And kind of wondering how to walk with all four legs now ehehe!"
"Well..." Jordan took a deep breath and calmed himself. After the initial shock of finding out he had been turned into a fat Luxray taur, he had been panicking. But after a moment of calm, Jordan couldn't help but admit he did feel kind of good. "Why aren't you surprised? You seem totally fine with it, almost as though you knew from the beginning and were expecting this." Jordan again tried to move. It wasn't easy moving 4 legs around a large belly, but soon he got the hang of it and walked/waddled to Light.
"I dunno... I just seems so natural being this huge and wide. Everything just feels so soft and squishy and warm!" Light just really start purring as he uses his lower paws to knead all over his gigantic blue belly, completely in bliss in the sheer size of his body.
"I'll not deny that this is kind of nice, but..." Jordan scratched the back of his head. "What about our parents? What about the effects of the berries? We do have things to lose you know."
"We could always waddle back and explain things. A parent always knows whom their child is!" Light beams in pride as he puffs out his rather wide upper belly at Jordan.
"Not sure if our parents would recognize two obese Luxray taurs as their children." Jordan replied. "But still... we could wait a while to see if the effects of the berries are permanent. With luck, in a few hours we will be human again." Suddenly both of his stomachs growled. "Well, if we can stay away from the berries long enough. How am I still hungry? I just ate probably over 9,000 berries!"
Light is happily eating the berries as he watches his friend start to slim down and lose the tauric half of his body," Huh, maybe the side effects must've warn off on you buddy. You look completely pear shape right about now and still a Luxray!"
Jordan glanced down to confirm. "What? Wow, that was fast." Jordan suddenly flinched as his stomach grumbled again, but this time louder and more painfully. "Alright, alright. Hey Light, save a few for me!" Jordan approached as rapidly as he could to the next tree of berries, which with his large gut wasn't as quick as you'd think. But with the first bite, Jordan had joined Light again in the berry binge. There seemed to be something about the berries that had addictive properties.
"Hehe, eat anymore and you will end up like me!" Light replies with a purr as he feels his heavy taur belly land upon the ground, jiggling all about with its mass as suddenly felt quite full at the moment.
Jordan paused a moment from eating berries and replied, "That may not entirely be a bad thing. It does feel great to be so fluffy, and that can't be a bad thing, right?" He rubbed his belly a bit and began purring. "I guess it grows on you. Uh, no pun intended."
"Yeah it does... Heh, maybe we could get everyone to eat these with us to become big adorable fat luxrays?" He asks in joy," I never thought becoming a Pokemon would be so much fuuun!"
"Now that's an idea." Jordan said between bites. "But I don't think we'd be able to 'convince' them to do it. Besides, these berries are so good the first person we gave them to would eat them all." Jordan stopped wolfing down berries as he finally felt full. With a belly over 5 feet hanging over his waist, it was amazing Jordan wasn't full earlier.
"Merf, I just feel so faat and full right now J!" Light would groan heavily as he rubs his thick and roundly fat upper belly, doing his best to waddle back home on all four legs," Hey! We better head home its almost dark! Hehe, we can eat more later!"
"Yeah, and there are a ton of berries growing here." Jordan looked back to see Light a good distance away. "Hey, wait for me!" He yelled as began to waddle as quickly as he could back to the village. He couldn't help but purr as his body jiggled with his movement.
Thus the two rather wide and heavy electric felines are quickly heading there way home. The two of large beasts look big enough to fit several shopping carts worth of food into their bellies and then some. It is just amazing how much weight they have pack upon their frames, even if their sizes are at a slight difference due to Light being mostly a taur and having so much fat upon his bellies that he clearly must weigh more than a ton at his size! Jordon looks mostly like a normal size Snorlax at his current weight though and has no hope of being able to enter into door ways quite well anymore.
In fact, the two of them would never make it home during that day as they are just too hefty and fat. The reason being that carrying all that weight has left them so exhausted that they collapse near the edge of the forest, resting heavily against each other's bulk as they slowly but surely fade away into dream land. The day ending and soon leading way into dreams of hamburgers for the two electric lions to feast upon. Leaving them feeling hungry even as they slept, not caring about what awaits them in the future....
The End?
This story was the most fun I have had in a long time (even over video games- shocker!). This story is a co-op write between
light-the-lucario and I. We alternate between me writing and then him writing, with the exception of the dialogue (we voiced ourselves) and the last 2 paragraphs/The End?. This was so much fun that I am now permanently open for co-op write offers, as long as the subject is within my comfort zone. Just tell me if you want to co-op write in a note and specify what subject(s) you want the story to be about.
Again, special thanks to Light-the-Lucario for offering to co-op write with me. It was a fun experience I hope to enjoy again.
You can find his version here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14149467/
Not much is indeed known about the forest at all to the two young boys. Exploration of the vast sea of trees always brings a sense of adventure between the two of them as they start looking around for anything interesting that catches their eye! For the two young teenagers, this was the best way for them to be able to have fun without adults getting in their way. In that regard, they fulfill it quite easily as they search every knock and cranny of Volundree Woods. Going deeper than they ever could during this day, not knowing that it is always deep within the forest where the unusual occurs.
"Hey, Jordan! Are you excited about finally going deeper into these woods?" asks Light, whom is currently wearing plain white sneakers with blue pants and a white shirt that matches his silvery hair that is hanging behind his head in a pony tail.
"Of course!" Jordan replied as he blew away a bee from his red t-shirt. "Who knows what we might find? A lost civilization, a giant tree.... maybe even a new species of plant!" Jordan blew away another bee from his shirt. "I bet I look like a plant with all this red on me. It's like shouting, look at me! I'm a giant flower!" With black and red pants, red shoes, and even a red hat to cover his slightly messed up hair, it was clear why all the bugs were out to get him.
"You should have picked something normal like mine," Light laughs as he pushes away some of the bushes, noticing a rather small tree with strange blue berries in the shape of strawberries growing from it," Heey check this out Jordan! I think I found that new plant that you were going on about over here!"
"Wooaah." Jordan was at a loss for words. The tree had all sorts of the strange blue strawberries, and all of them seemed ripe and readying to fall. "What do you suppose they taste like? They aren't any of the danger colors for berries, so I'm assuming they're edible. Why don't we try one out?"
"I think that would be the best way to see if they are good too! Nothing ventured, nothing gained as they say!" Light replies with a chuckle as he plucks one of the berries off and begins to chew them up," The taste of sour and dryness of these berries is really good! They are so juicy too and kind of makes me to wanna eat more!"
"Really?" Jordan replied, eyeing one of the berries in his hand. "Bottoms up!" Jordan threw the berry up into the air and into his mouth. After munching on it for a moment, Jordan smiled. "Wow, those are good! I think we have our lunch Light!"
"Heh, yeah I agree. I think we really have found our lunch!" the white haired young man happily starts to devour the berries before him greedily," I could just eat all of these with how good they are!"
"No way!" Jordan countered as he ate a third. "I could eat more than you easily!" He kicked the tree, and a whole bunch of the blue strawberries fell onto the ground, thankfully without a bruise. Jordan dashed over to a pile and began devouring them.
"Hey! Leave some berries for me!" Light grumbled as he starts to dig into berries.
The young human didn't even notice that his shirt is now starting to ride up his gut as he starts to swell heavily around the midsection with fat. A thick layer of fuzz begins to spread all throughout his body as he starts to dig in further to devour the berries in order to catch up with his friend. There is no way he is going to let Jordan beat him in an eating contest. Light is so blind to the changes that he doesn't even notice the sudden in crease of height towards his body too. He had gained at least a foot in height and a foot in weight around that rather hefty stomach of his!
Jordan wasn't left out of the changes. With every bite and swallow his belly grew larger and larger. As he grew taller fur began to grow from his increasingly exposed belly outwards. With his headstart over Light, the changes were more extreme. Already he had gained at least two feet of stomach, and if you looked closely you could see his arms and legs change shape. Jordan however was too focused on outeating his friend and the delicious taste if the berries. Jordan's hands and legs slowly formed into paws, and as the spreading fur reached his hair it spiked up like an anime character.
Light wasn't easily out done by his friend at all as he finally got upto speed with catching up to Jordan's rather huge lead on eating the berries. Because he is able to catch up with him, the chances that are occurring throughout his body are increasing quite a bit in pace. His shirt rides up quite a bit on his stomach as it increases in size and jiggles about freely in the air, it is completely covered in blue fur, thick and silky smooth, its size more than matches that of his friend. Changes even affect his skeletal stretch as he suddenly sprouts a long slender black tail that snakes its way out of his pants and grows to a rather impressive length, gaining a strange yellow tuff of fur at the end of it that looks like an electrical spark.
"Purrrr... Everything is just so delicious to eat J!" Light replies as his head changes to look more feline, with his hair now black and spiky all over, having a few bangs hanging over his eyes that are now changing into a yellow color with an outer red color surrounding them.
"You know it." Jordan said as he swallowed yet another berry. By now, it was clear Jordan and Light weren't human anymore. With paws for hands and legs, blue and black fur everywhere, and a feline head, the two had transformed into Luxrays! But that wasn't their only change. As the two greedily gobbled the mysterious berries, their bellies grew larger and larger. Already Jordan had just over 3 feet of belly, and it was starting to sag over his somehow-still-on pants.
The two are now drowning within their senses as they get lost with all the food they are stuffing into themselves. It is just so tasty and delicious that it completely overshadows all their senses. It is because of that that the two formerly human boys miss out on suddenly gaining extra pair of limbs! Their legs change to suite the change as they suddenly gain four legs and two bellies at that. Their paws having change a bit, to have black ones in the back and blue ones in the front. Clothes are fully ripped apart, at least for their pants as nothing can be down to hold together their new Taurific bodies. Weight gain is now focusing itself into the new second belly with a gusto, causing it to swell into a big blue dome of soft marshmallow like fat!
Time passed in an instant and yet it seemed to take forever to get there. For the two once humans turned Luxray taurs, the moment was over too soon. By the time the sun began to set, every single blue oversized strawberry was gone, nothing left in the wake of the two's feasting might. Their two stomachs were proof of such; with bellies nearing their immobility, it was amazing they were able to move at all. Still the two were in stupor. The berries effect having not worn off yet, the two reached for berries that were no longer there. However, this only lasted for a moment before Jordan began to snap out of it.
"Huh?!" His slightly closed eyes widened, and became saucers once feeling returned to his body. "What the- WHAT THE HECK?!?" Jordan frantically looked over his new, plump, Luxray taur body. "What happened to me?!"
"What are you talking about buddy?" Light is too busy munching into the bush to even notice the changes that happens to him as his wide blue taur belly starts to heavily lay itself upon the ground!
"Look at yourself!" Jordan said in shock. "Those berries did something to us!" He experimentally tried moving, and awkwardly his body jiggled as he tried to get used to having 4 legs and two large bellies. "Dude, snap out of it! There aren't an berries left on the tree! We ate them all!"
Light blinks as he points to another tree nearby," What about those and whoa look at me! I look good hehe! How can you be in shock over this man? I feel so soft and cuddly right now! And kind of wondering how to walk with all four legs now ehehe!"
"Well..." Jordan took a deep breath and calmed himself. After the initial shock of finding out he had been turned into a fat Luxray taur, he had been panicking. But after a moment of calm, Jordan couldn't help but admit he did feel kind of good. "Why aren't you surprised? You seem totally fine with it, almost as though you knew from the beginning and were expecting this." Jordan again tried to move. It wasn't easy moving 4 legs around a large belly, but soon he got the hang of it and walked/waddled to Light.
"I dunno... I just seems so natural being this huge and wide. Everything just feels so soft and squishy and warm!" Light just really start purring as he uses his lower paws to knead all over his gigantic blue belly, completely in bliss in the sheer size of his body.
"I'll not deny that this is kind of nice, but..." Jordan scratched the back of his head. "What about our parents? What about the effects of the berries? We do have things to lose you know."
"We could always waddle back and explain things. A parent always knows whom their child is!" Light beams in pride as he puffs out his rather wide upper belly at Jordan.
"Not sure if our parents would recognize two obese Luxray taurs as their children." Jordan replied. "But still... we could wait a while to see if the effects of the berries are permanent. With luck, in a few hours we will be human again." Suddenly both of his stomachs growled. "Well, if we can stay away from the berries long enough. How am I still hungry? I just ate probably over 9,000 berries!"
Light is happily eating the berries as he watches his friend start to slim down and lose the tauric half of his body," Huh, maybe the side effects must've warn off on you buddy. You look completely pear shape right about now and still a Luxray!"
Jordan glanced down to confirm. "What? Wow, that was fast." Jordan suddenly flinched as his stomach grumbled again, but this time louder and more painfully. "Alright, alright. Hey Light, save a few for me!" Jordan approached as rapidly as he could to the next tree of berries, which with his large gut wasn't as quick as you'd think. But with the first bite, Jordan had joined Light again in the berry binge. There seemed to be something about the berries that had addictive properties.
"Hehe, eat anymore and you will end up like me!" Light replies with a purr as he feels his heavy taur belly land upon the ground, jiggling all about with its mass as suddenly felt quite full at the moment.
Jordan paused a moment from eating berries and replied, "That may not entirely be a bad thing. It does feel great to be so fluffy, and that can't be a bad thing, right?" He rubbed his belly a bit and began purring. "I guess it grows on you. Uh, no pun intended."
"Yeah it does... Heh, maybe we could get everyone to eat these with us to become big adorable fat luxrays?" He asks in joy," I never thought becoming a Pokemon would be so much fuuun!"
"Now that's an idea." Jordan said between bites. "But I don't think we'd be able to 'convince' them to do it. Besides, these berries are so good the first person we gave them to would eat them all." Jordan stopped wolfing down berries as he finally felt full. With a belly over 5 feet hanging over his waist, it was amazing Jordan wasn't full earlier.
"Merf, I just feel so faat and full right now J!" Light would groan heavily as he rubs his thick and roundly fat upper belly, doing his best to waddle back home on all four legs," Hey! We better head home its almost dark! Hehe, we can eat more later!"
"Yeah, and there are a ton of berries growing here." Jordan looked back to see Light a good distance away. "Hey, wait for me!" He yelled as began to waddle as quickly as he could back to the village. He couldn't help but purr as his body jiggled with his movement.
Thus the two rather wide and heavy electric felines are quickly heading there way home. The two of large beasts look big enough to fit several shopping carts worth of food into their bellies and then some. It is just amazing how much weight they have pack upon their frames, even if their sizes are at a slight difference due to Light being mostly a taur and having so much fat upon his bellies that he clearly must weigh more than a ton at his size! Jordon looks mostly like a normal size Snorlax at his current weight though and has no hope of being able to enter into door ways quite well anymore.
In fact, the two of them would never make it home during that day as they are just too hefty and fat. The reason being that carrying all that weight has left them so exhausted that they collapse near the edge of the forest, resting heavily against each other's bulk as they slowly but surely fade away into dream land. The day ending and soon leading way into dreams of hamburgers for the two electric lions to feast upon. Leaving them feeling hungry even as they slept, not caring about what awaits them in the future....
The End?
This story was the most fun I have had in a long time (even over video games- shocker!). This story is a co-op write between
light-the-lucario and I. We alternate between me writing and then him writing, with the exception of the dialogue (we voiced ourselves) and the last 2 paragraphs/The End?. This was so much fun that I am now permanently open for co-op write offers, as long as the subject is within my comfort zone. Just tell me if you want to co-op write in a note and specify what subject(s) you want the story to be about.Again, special thanks to Light-the-Lucario for offering to co-op write with me. It was a fun experience I hope to enjoy again.
You can find his version here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14149467/
Category Story / Fat Furs
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I really enjoyed this. The pace was just right as it didn't rush the story or keep me waiting, and I always love it when gainers have no one to blame but themselves and a weird food. The idea of addictive berries is one of my all time favorites. Farther points for making them become too heavy to walk home, leaving it open ended. They might wake up and have to go back for more berries. There's nothing about this I don't like.
Thanks for the evaluation! But I'm not going to take all the credit; light-the-lucario wrote half of it too. And I agree, addictive berries is a fun topic. The open ended ending was Light's touch, and I'm not going to lie when I say I almost wanted to write a sequel immediately after reading the ending.
light-the-lucario wrote half of it too. And I agree, addictive berries is a fun topic. The open ended ending was Light's touch, and I'm not going to lie when I say I almost wanted to write a sequel immediately after reading the ending. 
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