
This is my first sub to FA using Caleb Lloyd's Character. Enjoy and please critique.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Badger
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 17.7 kB
Listed in Folders
You're doing a good job at characterizing Darius as well as Caleb. Granted, I don't think I'm thaaaat out of shape, Traveling around the woods gives some level of fitness, despite how little it seems to affect me :)
The story of a young fox stealing a blueberry pie and eating it whole was very cute. Nice job!
The story of a young fox stealing a blueberry pie and eating it whole was very cute. Nice job!
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