
Team 23 - Initial Sketch - Critique please?
Here is a dramatic image of Duke Donovan, Caleb McGuinness, and Scott Tempesh of The Legacy's Team 23 (from our Masque of the Red Death 2K game.)
The Legacy was created to fight the Evil force of Vlad Tempst and his minions at the turn of the 20th century. With an agreed rules of etiquette, each faction fights one another in a super-spy genre infused with magic while trapped in the realm of Ravenloft's post Masque of the Red Death era.
http://www.furnation.com/torakhan/g...../2k/index.html
I've taken a lot of liberties here: For instance, Duke (big guy with the cowboy hat) should be almost a foot shorter, so that could change. Caleb is pretty spot on, and Scott here doesn't really have any sort of spell that creates an orb like that. But since Spycraft 2.0 came out (well, actually since Dark Inheritance came out), Scott's magical abilities have really gotten neutered. :(
I haven't decided on the rest of the composition.. if I'll show any sort of monster they're fighting, or just make some sort of background graphic. My intention is to ink this up and use it as part of a portfolio to show to the Crafty Games guys.
I know there's some muscular issues with Duke's arms.. but that all may get changed too as I make him shorter and whatnot.
Any other helpful critique?
The Legacy was created to fight the Evil force of Vlad Tempst and his minions at the turn of the 20th century. With an agreed rules of etiquette, each faction fights one another in a super-spy genre infused with magic while trapped in the realm of Ravenloft's post Masque of the Red Death era.
http://www.furnation.com/torakhan/g...../2k/index.html
I've taken a lot of liberties here: For instance, Duke (big guy with the cowboy hat) should be almost a foot shorter, so that could change. Caleb is pretty spot on, and Scott here doesn't really have any sort of spell that creates an orb like that. But since Spycraft 2.0 came out (well, actually since Dark Inheritance came out), Scott's magical abilities have really gotten neutered. :(
I haven't decided on the rest of the composition.. if I'll show any sort of monster they're fighting, or just make some sort of background graphic. My intention is to ink this up and use it as part of a portfolio to show to the Crafty Games guys.
I know there's some muscular issues with Duke's arms.. but that all may get changed too as I make him shorter and whatnot.
Any other helpful critique?
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 600 x 464px
File Size 86.2 kB
erf, I dont know much about the game, so bear with me. The chainsaw that Duke is holding. Too me it looks like he is holding a little tikes toy chainsaw. But like I said it could be some other type of weapon from you game that I dont know off. Other then that. I love the rest of it. I really like all the folds in the clothes, especially on the formal clothing like the vest.
Thank you for the critique. :D
It's an electric chainsaw... but the design does look pretty toy-ish so far.
In fact.. I think Duke will be completely redrawn from the ground up. Between proportions, musculature, and other issues, I'm just not happy with him. I'm happier with the rest (Scott's weird hand has to get fixed, moved, or something) for the most part.
Thank you for the compliment on the clothing. :D I rather like it myself.
It's an electric chainsaw... but the design does look pretty toy-ish so far.
In fact.. I think Duke will be completely redrawn from the ground up. Between proportions, musculature, and other issues, I'm just not happy with him. I'm happier with the rest (Scott's weird hand has to get fixed, moved, or something) for the most part.
Thank you for the compliment on the clothing. :D I rather like it myself.
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