WHOA!

Quite an Improvement don't you think? =3

No,farts! *faps*

Also,that. :3

I actually surprised myself =3

Looks awesome, dude

Thanks X3

I like how his legs are pointing inward. Small detail, but gives a sense of the desperation. X///3

I liked that too X3

I do remember when you uploaded the first one, actually I thought you just reposted but then I realized it's a new one.
You definitely improved! Your character has more details, and more gas xD also what Isle just said about the legs, makes the situation look better in general, all that is proof of your improvement!

Thanks I amaze myself sometimes =D

I love fart stuff ; w;
Do you do more like this?

Oh I do as well as other stuff you can check out my first Pokemon only account

You know, if Zetaro's kind was the one to originally grow the Puffigen fruits, might Zetaro eventually try one of these?

I'm sure it would enhance his "wind" powers quite a lot, lol.

He might X3

Good.

Awesome ^^

Heh.. you did a really nice job improving on this one.. :)

Wow that's a lot of gas. Zornell must be horribly embarrassed. Did nobody tell him what this 'vicked fruit' can do to one's body? xD
If I recall correctly from reading one story you've written which involved eating the Puffigen fruit, that not only does it cause excessive gas, but the gas itself is pretty foul as well. Zornell must be stinking up this room at an alarming rate :3
But that also raises the question, who would leave this volatile fruit there on a table? Was Betos initially planning to snack on it? :O

Probably but Zetaro is the Only one that can eat it and not wind up Bloating or getting excessive gas XD

Ooooff, poor Zornell~ ^^; Love his expression, his curled tail, and the amount of gas erupting out of him, I can imagine the intestinal pain, haha!