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This started out as something way different, meaning to be only practice with an old naga character. But then me and Taluthus talked and this happened. :3 Hope you like this!
Also I think it added a background on it's own, I made it without the white backing... hope it doesn't make it not as good...
I think this is like some kind of honor or something? Being able to swallow the nomsune himself!
Feedback would be awesome, as this is my first real piece like this.
Also I think it added a background on it's own, I made it without the white backing... hope it doesn't make it not as good...
I think this is like some kind of honor or something? Being able to swallow the nomsune himself!
Feedback would be awesome, as this is my first real piece like this.
Category All / Vore
Species Exotic (Other)
Size 1164 x 1280px
File Size 82.7 kB
Hmmm... what to say? I like the way youve made it look as thoigh you actuaply have more mass in your throat and gut, but a suggestion to emphasize that thicken the bulge-lines. When they're thicker, it appears that they occupy a different plane of space, closer to.the viewer, and hence are actually bulges. Also, you could but a few small lines in the flesh tonshow bulges too. Overall the general shape is alright, though id recommend doing more anatomy practice - one can never have too much more anatomy practice!otherwise, it's a great start!
This piece looks decent enough but you need quite a bit of work as well. Now i'm not an artist so i may be wrong on what exactly needs to be worked on so i'd go with Wisty's Advice, but for me i see no obvious noticeable bulge to show Tal, One tail seems to be coming from your Head. and in a few area's you have points where there should be curves. over all this is better than what i could do but it needs work. I hope i've been helpful and i don't mean to come off as a jerk.
Great Start otherwise i wish you the best on your road to getting better. And From what i understand yes it is a honor to being able to have consent to eat a Apex Pred.
Great Start otherwise i wish you the best on your road to getting better. And From what i understand yes it is a honor to being able to have consent to eat a Apex Pred.
That tail is coming from the other side of his maw, it's just a bit too thin too quick. In my sketches I planned it to be visible from his maw, but the other tail wasn't a planned one, so it got in the way. :P
And I guess that's the benefit of being good friends with said apex pred. :3
And I guess that's the benefit of being good friends with said apex pred. :3
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