well, the dress is stylish and beautiful as far as I can tell from the sketch. and your critter doesn't look that bad. but she's tilting to the left? anyway, she's a shapely lady.

this picture is clearly a WHIP XD

Thanks, I have a few photos of me in the dress, I'm not sure if I have any in my gallery on here or not. Yeah shes a bit tilted, mostly because ti was jsut a doodle and i didn't bother tilting the paper when i scanned it to make her stand straight lol, but yes she is indeed fairly shapely.

lol nice ;P

I think if you put a little rework into her face it would be enough to make it worthwhile finishing it. :)

Yeah, as it is right now its quite obvious i was much more interested in drawing the dress rather than the person wearing it so shes only a vague image of the idea i had at the time, and when i couldn't get her to look how i wanted quickly enough i stopped trying just cus i mostly drew it due to the urge to draw that dress at the time anyway, but with some work i think it could actually possibly become a decent piece, i'm thinking of drawing Laureli in that dress at some point perhaps, i really need to draw more

ooh, that would look nifty as heck! :) go for it, I say!

hehe, i would have drawn that instead of this one, but at the time i wanted to try something else, so i did, but i do wanna draw the dress on Laureli since she is me basically and i like drawing her in clothes i actually own as well as ones i wish i did lol