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So here is Chapter 8. Sorry if the wait was a long time. I had a bit of writers block. I had a muse help me with this chapter.
Category Story / Baby fur
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I love it. If I may offer some constructive criticism...for dialogue, put the different characters speech in new paragraphs. For example:
"Hi jim how are you today?" Said bob.
"I am good; you?" Said Jim.
Its a rule all novels follow and it makes it easier for the reader. I loved this chapter btw!
"Hi jim how are you today?" Said bob.
"I am good; you?" Said Jim.
Its a rule all novels follow and it makes it easier for the reader. I loved this chapter btw!
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