
Draw by Max
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 853 x 1280px
File Size 215.4 kB
What are you saying? I was just telling you that some grammar here in this mini comic is incorrect. Where it says "Stop act like so busy all the time" it should be saying "Stop acting like you're busy all the time". And "You're actually quite free wasn't you?" Instead of wasn't, it should be aren't. And after free, there should be a comma, because you're seperating the sentence to end it with a question. I even read your comic outloud, and so far, Grehard's and Max's dialog didn't even sound right. Where are you going off about my comments not making sense?
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