beautiful drawing

Thank you.

you´re welcome

you will remember on my comment in da that i least you the freedom to used my ideas to do what you can. that is no joke from me ,because the most ideas from the story come from you.

By the Story from Rio 3 Blu meet his Parents.
Have i only a idea about a scene that played in the Night. That Last Time thought Jewel that Blu disappear only a reason is to search a Brazil Nut for she. But that was not the true reason. She wake up middle in the Night and notice Blu go outside and fly anywhere. Jewel follow Blu without that he notice she.

So far the only idea from me after the break.

Okay.

I said about this that you used my ideas if you it like from this story.

But i will know about you what you think from my last idea for the story.

Okay^^

ah ok that is good.

I sort of the Scenes from the story and check what is miss here.

Then have i the continue part from my last idea where Jewel follow Blu.
After a While landing Blu on the ground in the near from the River. Jewel hide and look in a good distance and have the thought what Blu do here in this time.

That scene is nice.

that is good is too the continue part from the last idea the i have posted than comment. But here stuck i what here should happen than next. By the Scene where Blu telling their Parents that he is care in the last many years from a human. I thought that the Reaction from Blu's Mother is more happy and that it for she matter is and only that he is health and alive. By Blu's Father can it be different or he is too happy that their Son is alive.

If you have your own imagination about this can you it me say.

Then have i a question about your when you go offline time?

What about, Blu's parents have their own tribe too, like Jewel also has. The tribe of Blu, located on the forest where Blu has been caught by smugglers. But they are just few, together with the other birds in the forest.

that hear on how a interesting idea that played after the Reunion from Blu and their parents. We keep this idea in mind and focus us better to finish this story.

Should the Reaction from Blu's Parents be different after this what their Son telling to them that he is care in the last many years from a human than a Pet?

Um, I dont know, or it depends, because they dont experience to be taken care of a human for years.

you have right but again avoid they human thing but for their Son have they take the courage to fly inside a human thing.

Yeah, agree.

then have i problem with the Scene Eduardo's Flashback or called we this Treasured Memories from a dearly beloved. the point is where i this scene put in the story. i Know so far that we the scene from Blu's Disappear where Jewel wake up and noticed the Disappear from Blu and then the Scene where Jewel follow Blu in the Night. Maybe should this scene play in the time where Jewel visit Eduardo and ask if he see Blu in this morning or it played in the next day or by night.

In the disapearance of Blu, it will be played by Jewel sleeping or she's awake?

ok the Scene should play in the time where Jewel notice the disappear from Blu where Jewel visit their father and him again leave to ask the other to Blu's dissappear. I think that this scene played before or or after the Scene where Blu is in the tree again with a Brazil Nut aside him. I will still thinking about this. By the Scene where Jewel telling Blu their Memories from their Mother will play after the Scene where Jewel find Blu and ask what he doing in this time in this place. The Scene show the both sitting on a tree and by telling their story start slow the next day. then have i wrote a idea for a scene where Blu and Jewel telling about that what they experience and what it will if the both never met have,that they are not here today than a family. this scene will played after the Scene Blu's reunion with his parent.

I will take me enough time without to rush for this for a good Sequel in Comic Novel Form. Then too because someone not know about release date for the Movie Rio 3 by Blue Sky Studios.

yup, it depends on how long will the production of the film will be finished.

i think that Blue Sky Studio had get enough experience from Rio and Rio 2 that the third Part not need to many years to will finish. By the Story need someone a year or few months.

But i think about your mind from my Scenes course to far.
By the Scene where Eduardo played and remembered on the good times with their Wife Maya think i that this Scene will played after the Scene where Jewel leave him to ask the other if somebody see Blu.
Eduardo look to their daughter and Mimi say that she look how their mother.
Eduardo will say: It make me sad that you are not here to see your daughter will a beautiful lady how you. My Wildflower Maia i miss you.
Mimi will look sad and say:Brother.
Eduardo puts one wing on their chest and say:Only in my Memories will you live on.
Here will come a Memory Scene.
Then come the Scene where Jewel flew in their tree and notice Blu with a Brazil Nut aside him.
They think that this the reason was why Blu is not here in the early morning. She enjoy the day and visit their father that look sad.
Jewel will ask him but their aunt come and say that she him leave alone for a while. Jewel will know the reason. Their Aunt Mimi say that she this her telling in a other place.

By the next Scene where Aunt Mimi and Jewel played will i make a little change that Jewel only say "what is going on with him. Their Aunt Mimi answered that it because their Mother and that if he look to their daughter remember on her.


I will still sort the single scenes and will what put or anything change by this story.

The scenes are nicely done. Well, Jewel's mother died, and Blu is seen by Jewel with a Brazilian nut.

In the Novel will it say that Jewel's Mother is dead but how she died was not properly declared by Blue Sky Studios. By the Situation from Fire and Smoke cover the sight and is everywhere. Can the point that she is alive is very vague and i think that everybody from Eduardo's Flock should notice the missing from somebody their kind fast or that something happen with somebody. That Jewel Mother is really dead.

But back to the Story Blu meet his parent.

Here show i the rough Story course for a few scenes from this story.

Before the Scene "Jewel notice Blu with a Brazil Nut aside him" come the Scene where their three chicks coming to her and asking where their dad is.

Then the Scene where one or two from the sibling notice that something is wrong with the one or both sibling and follow the one or both and ask what is something.

Next Scene the two siblings or one sibling will flew to Jewel and say that something is wrong with their sibling/s.

That the Scene come that played in the tree with the talk between Jewel and one or two their siblings.

Here will i put the Scene where Jewel Notice that something is wrong with their dad and after this scene come the Scene where Jewel talk with their aunt Mimi.

Then the next Scene where Jewel hug their dad and say to him that she is alive and back to him.

Then come the Scene where Jewel flew back to their tree and notice Blu with a Brazil Nut.

ok that was the course from the story where Jewel notice Blu Disappear until to the point where Blu is back with a Brazil Nut in their tree.

By the Story will i put a Scene that show Blu's Father wake up in the middle of night and look to Blu's Mother. Blu's Mother look to the Moon and have only the hope that their chick is alive. Blu's Father come to her and stand aside she and puts a wing on her. Blu's Father say to her that they need sleep that they are well rested can start the next day. Blu's Mother agree the opinion their husband. Their both beaks touch and both goes again sleep.

This Scene played between the Scenes "The first meet a Bulldog called Luiz" and "The Flight to the Amazon".

I will continue my best for this story and will not making to many changes on this. Lots of Scene will end up than alternative story route.

By Create a Story for a Comic or Movie should someone not be stressed and least time for this,because the ideas will come but not to fast.

Great idea.

Than Great Idea said you the Scene where someone see Blu's Father and Mother.