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I read JACK, a webcomic that everyone should search for right now.
Right now.
No, stop what you're doing. Go look.
We can wait.
*cue wait music*
Okay, thanks.
In order from rightmost to leftmost we have Drip, the sin of Lust, Kane, the sin of Envy with one of his Rework servants, Vince the sin of Greed, The Vorshes - two fold trapped in one body as often as not - the sin of Gluttony, the sin of Pride whose name I forget (but you're reading the comic now so you'll find out), and the sin of Sloth isn't pictured because his particular punishment in Hell is complicated to represent.
Right now.
No, stop what you're doing. Go look.
We can wait.
*cue wait music*
Okay, thanks.
In order from rightmost to leftmost we have Drip, the sin of Lust, Kane, the sin of Envy with one of his Rework servants, Vince the sin of Greed, The Vorshes - two fold trapped in one body as often as not - the sin of Gluttony, the sin of Pride whose name I forget (but you're reading the comic now so you'll find out), and the sin of Sloth isn't pictured because his particular punishment in Hell is complicated to represent.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fanart
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Size 459 x 597px
File Size 82.1 kB
While the atomy and body structure just seems decent, it's also visible that most of it was guesswork and you did not work out from a proper model. Like the character in the middle, his hips seem odd or missing and his legs aren't evenly thick. Moreover, even for a stand with any ground, it’s hard to say how he’s actually keeping balance.
You need to draw a small “stick figure” model with lines and circles much like the cheap artistic ones you can buy. Doing this, you will 1) get the basic idea of the pose you’re trying to draw, 2) get to adjust the character’s figure (height, fat, etc) and create a natural shape, 3) see if the pose actually works before you’ve come to that point where you realize it’s a bit off.
As I said at Lucian’s place, you seem to have mastered detailing just fine. You just got to shape your figures better before working out those details.
You need to draw a small “stick figure” model with lines and circles much like the cheap artistic ones you can buy. Doing this, you will 1) get the basic idea of the pose you’re trying to draw, 2) get to adjust the character’s figure (height, fat, etc) and create a natural shape, 3) see if the pose actually works before you’ve come to that point where you realize it’s a bit off.
As I said at Lucian’s place, you seem to have mastered detailing just fine. You just got to shape your figures better before working out those details.
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