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Finally got this part done.
Kassel's story continues. Though it seemed much longer working on it, it's still only 5 chapters. Long enough for the amount that happens in it. You may notice something about 5/8ths in (no spoilers, don't worry), that the actual first part to this series was actually suppose to end with this one, whereas Surface Tension (the song) is used. I suppose you could call it a long demo, but eh.
I won't say too much more about this one. There's still some comedy in it, not as much as the first, but things really start to get serious here. And the next part probably will have next to nothing for comedy. I'll see when I write it. But regardless, enjoy the second part to Hollow Bodies.
Hollow Bodies (Song/Album) is by Blessthefall
Dark City is by Machinae Supremacy
Kassel's story continues. Though it seemed much longer working on it, it's still only 5 chapters. Long enough for the amount that happens in it. You may notice something about 5/8ths in (no spoilers, don't worry), that the actual first part to this series was actually suppose to end with this one, whereas Surface Tension (the song) is used. I suppose you could call it a long demo, but eh.
I won't say too much more about this one. There's still some comedy in it, not as much as the first, but things really start to get serious here. And the next part probably will have next to nothing for comedy. I'll see when I write it. But regardless, enjoy the second part to Hollow Bodies.
Hollow Bodies (Song/Album) is by Blessthefall
Dark City is by Machinae Supremacy
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Canine (Other)
Size 120 x 80px
File Size 124.6 kB
Listed in Folders
Hi there again, I did not meant to comment this late... but here I go:
I did really enjoy this part of the story as well; the provided background information of Kassel, unravels some mysteries and creates some new ones! Things like that keep me reading; and I enjoyed the additional humor as well. I am quite curious if Kassel can work out everything; he got himself in quite the situation..
I also liked the music you used; I really liked the Dark City song, by Machinae Supremacy. Very different then I actually thought how it would be. I thought all the music was quite fitting, makes some parts a bit more serious against reading them without the music..
Overall I thought this story brings interesting twists, which really makes this a great read! So well done again! And did you really have to end with a cliffhanger? :P Can’t wait to see what is going to happen next!
-Silent Moonlight Dragon
I did really enjoy this part of the story as well; the provided background information of Kassel, unravels some mysteries and creates some new ones! Things like that keep me reading; and I enjoyed the additional humor as well. I am quite curious if Kassel can work out everything; he got himself in quite the situation..
I also liked the music you used; I really liked the Dark City song, by Machinae Supremacy. Very different then I actually thought how it would be. I thought all the music was quite fitting, makes some parts a bit more serious against reading them without the music..
Overall I thought this story brings interesting twists, which really makes this a great read! So well done again! And did you really have to end with a cliffhanger? :P Can’t wait to see what is going to happen next!
-Silent Moonlight Dragon
Wow. I felt like this section was so long that I barely read through the ending more than once. I didn't even notice it ended in a Cliff. I half rushed it whereas it's been about a month in the making (on and off), it might be a good idea for me to re-read it a few times to make sure I don't forget anything in the next part.
I'm glad you liked the music. Machinae is a great band that has done some amazing work. Even the earliest songs are great, but only if you can stand his voice. Even though I wouldn't describe it as harsh or screamo, it's not the easiest to get used to.
If you're interested in more of them, their main hits (in my opinion) are: Player One, Through The Looking Glass, Rogue World Asylum, Persona, and probably my favorite song by them is Edge And Pearl. Edge probably because it took me about three years to figure out what it was about, and after I discovered it, it was amazing.
Anyway, enjoy those. And I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. The next one might take some time, but I'll try not to rush it. It's still quite far from the end, and I might end up cramming the remainder of the story together in a rather long one. We'll see what happens.
Much love, Silent. It's an absolute pleasure to hear from you!
I'm glad you liked the music. Machinae is a great band that has done some amazing work. Even the earliest songs are great, but only if you can stand his voice. Even though I wouldn't describe it as harsh or screamo, it's not the easiest to get used to.
If you're interested in more of them, their main hits (in my opinion) are: Player One, Through The Looking Glass, Rogue World Asylum, Persona, and probably my favorite song by them is Edge And Pearl. Edge probably because it took me about three years to figure out what it was about, and after I discovered it, it was amazing.
Anyway, enjoy those. And I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. The next one might take some time, but I'll try not to rush it. It's still quite far from the end, and I might end up cramming the remainder of the story together in a rather long one. We'll see what happens.
Much love, Silent. It's an absolute pleasure to hear from you!
Haha, a cliffhanger is not the end of the world; so don't feel bad about it. I thought it was a fitting ending for this chapter!
Thanks for suggesting these songs; I will remember myself to listen them some time. And I am certainly checking Edge And Pearl!
And it's okay, I can wait. I have to prepare myself before some courses start again; so I will have less spare time. And I am sure it will be another great installment!
And thanks, that means a lot! Good luck with your writings and everything!
Thanks for suggesting these songs; I will remember myself to listen them some time. And I am certainly checking Edge And Pearl!
And it's okay, I can wait. I have to prepare myself before some courses start again; so I will have less spare time. And I am sure it will be another great installment!
And thanks, that means a lot! Good luck with your writings and everything!
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