Age: 26
Height: 6.30 ft
Weight: 220 lb
Elisa is an scottish fancy rat who moved with her aunt and some of her brothers and sisters to manhattan when she was aged 10.
As you can see shes a pretty overweighted woman, mainly because of the fact that shes a professional cook and she always end up eating up an small portion of the food she cooks for her customers, some people believe that her belly is a never ending hole, they see how it expands, groans and even rumbles in some cases but she never says shes full.
One thing that most people cant avoid noticing is her enormous butt, it seems that all the food she eats goes straight to her lower body and mainly her butt which she loves to use to seduce people, both men and women and can get pretty upset when she doesnt get enough attention.
She loves all kind of food, but mainly the spicy food even tough it gives her a lot of gas... and preffers to be away of people when she eats it.
She always enjoy belly rubs specially after having a big meal, and doesnt mind if someone grabs her butt, she actually enjoys it.
*Sorry for my bad english*
UPDATE: shrinked her butt slightly to resemble more one of my latest pics.
Made her hips and belly bigger.
Forgot to add the fact that both her mother and aunt are chinesse, thats why her surname is Lu
Height: 6.30 ft
Weight: 220 lb
Elisa is an scottish fancy rat who moved with her aunt and some of her brothers and sisters to manhattan when she was aged 10.
As you can see shes a pretty overweighted woman, mainly because of the fact that shes a professional cook and she always end up eating up an small portion of the food she cooks for her customers, some people believe that her belly is a never ending hole, they see how it expands, groans and even rumbles in some cases but she never says shes full.
One thing that most people cant avoid noticing is her enormous butt, it seems that all the food she eats goes straight to her lower body and mainly her butt which she loves to use to seduce people, both men and women and can get pretty upset when she doesnt get enough attention.
She loves all kind of food, but mainly the spicy food even tough it gives her a lot of gas... and preffers to be away of people when she eats it.
She always enjoy belly rubs specially after having a big meal, and doesnt mind if someone grabs her butt, she actually enjoys it.
*Sorry for my bad english*
UPDATE: shrinked her butt slightly to resemble more one of my latest pics.
Made her hips and belly bigger.
Forgot to add the fact that both her mother and aunt are chinesse, thats why her surname is Lu
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Rat
Size 800 x 480px
File Size 180.7 kB
Mostly just that. Personal opinion.
So looking at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20463279/ specifically since they're both the same character:
The quality of your work has improved dramatically, there's no question of that. But I feel your older material had a more organic quality to it. Maybe because it was still somewhat experimental and you were figuring out what did and didn't work? Each pass you take with Elisabeth seems to condense her just a little more, which is good in some ways. You have developed a solid sense of structure. The more you tweak the proportions, though, the more you make it fit the 'toon' archetype, which I think is where this is coming from. It's definitely still your art, but if you're trying to adhere to a specific format, it loses some of the charm your work had when it was purely your own creative experimentation.
Or this could all be a bunch of nonsense. My word is hardly law haha
What I'm trying to get at is, it would be unfortunate if you were to settle and stagnate. Don't be afraid to keep experimenting. You've made very impressive progress in a short span of time and I'm curious to see where you'll go from here.
Keep at it<3
So looking at http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20463279/ specifically since they're both the same character:
The quality of your work has improved dramatically, there's no question of that. But I feel your older material had a more organic quality to it. Maybe because it was still somewhat experimental and you were figuring out what did and didn't work? Each pass you take with Elisabeth seems to condense her just a little more, which is good in some ways. You have developed a solid sense of structure. The more you tweak the proportions, though, the more you make it fit the 'toon' archetype, which I think is where this is coming from. It's definitely still your art, but if you're trying to adhere to a specific format, it loses some of the charm your work had when it was purely your own creative experimentation.
Or this could all be a bunch of nonsense. My word is hardly law haha
What I'm trying to get at is, it would be unfortunate if you were to settle and stagnate. Don't be afraid to keep experimenting. You've made very impressive progress in a short span of time and I'm curious to see where you'll go from here.
Keep at it<3
yeah it all happened around 2015, i sat and took a look at my pics and all of a sudden i realized 2 things:
1- Elisa's head is too small
2- Her arms are too long
I mean her arms are meant to be longer than general to compensate the size of her torso and her short legs so i sort of wanted to change that.
I would really love to improvise more on her, i've just haven't had the time to do so in the past 5 months due to commissions
1- Elisa's head is too small
2- Her arms are too long
I mean her arms are meant to be longer than general to compensate the size of her torso and her short legs so i sort of wanted to change that.
I would really love to improvise more on her, i've just haven't had the time to do so in the past 5 months due to commissions
I still like the 2015 version of her, honestly, assuming this is what you were referring to: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17316478/
It just feels like her design was a bit less abbreviated and simplified in the older versions, but again, this all comes down to opinion.
It just feels like her design was a bit less abbreviated and simplified in the older versions, but again, this all comes down to opinion.
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