
The One Who Crawls: Page 6
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As a bit of critique, the word bubbles seem kinda weird on this page. The tags aren't particularly pointing at the speaker, and I feel the asymmetry of most panels/bubbles makes it a little more confusing. Like the last panel, for example - a ton of unused space, and, confusingly, the right-person's word bubble on the left, so you have to look through the other character to match the character with their word's.
First kinda serious critique, hope I'm not being annoying!
First kinda serious critique, hope I'm not being annoying!
Word bubbles can be tough when you draw first and add bubbles later. I keep trying to get in the habit of making the text part of the sketching process to avoid these sort of things, but a habit of 7 years is hard to break. I do appreciate the critique and I hope you could still manage to see who was talking!
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