FUCK! the feels ! she cant take anymore, captain!

Did she stepped on a bomb? or a big OHK trap?

Thin ice on a frozen lake.

It's not that hard to figure out.

Oops... derped...

bit rude, doubt most even realize whats happening

Yeah honestly I thought she ran into traffic.

I couldn't tell either. I was thinking she was attacked by something x_x

Well, now to be honest, it's a rough drawing.

Actually, I like it. Features and emotions sure come through, and staging looks good to me.

Yeah that was the only part I was having trouble with, though it does help to have it explained at this point. :3

agreed, all i saw was trees and a "crack" and though a tree fell on her or something. x.x

They're throwing snowballs at each other and the ground underneath goes "crack".

It really doesn't require a PhD in theoretical physics.

Doesn't require to be a smart ass about it either. Just cause you caught on doesn't mean the world is to follow.

agree I thought maybe a fallen tree branch or some unseen assailant but, I live where it never gets cold enough to freeze a lake over so I wouldn't have thought of that.

Ketrava

The world doesn't have to throw the hissy fit that it didn't follow, either.

Hissy fits are found when douchebags are around.

I thought the male had a heart attack and died, since I couldn't tell them apart after the flower fell.

You obviously speak English so I want you to search this in a dictionary.
Courtesy: and then I want you to learn from it, then we will see if your point/points are valid.

You need to look up how well used that word is today, though I may have to warn you the figures are (un) shocking. :I

Oh well... ignorance is bliss I guess?

I know XC the word empathy just doesn't seem to exist anymore XC
Or the idea of treat others the way you want to be treated XC.

I sometimes question how is it that humans have gotten so far.
A question that will never be answered.

After an event last night with some extroverted idiots... "idea of treat others the way you want to be treated " I don't think this'll ever bloody happen. "Stop speaking to me like a PoS", sorry, but if I wanted to speak to you like that lady, I'd be fucking screaming at you so loud the entire campus can hear. Expecting manners when you rung everyones bell because you're too stupid to bring your OWN keys with you, and then playing music too f-ing loud... *slams head on door*

As for how we got so far... ask any old person what their community was like. Then the govn't got too involved in parenting, and parents also stopped giving two shits. *lesigh* I don't want to live on earth any more D:

" "Stop speaking to me like a PoS" ....... "
^ Not directed at you, by the way :p That was the extroverted idiot last night.

"It is not what you say, but how you say it, that truly matters." -English Language :P

well taking a first look you cant tell theres even a lake (even if frozen) i at first thought he hit her with the ball too hard/it had a rock in it. and he had ended up hurting/killing her. till i looked over again

Does the D stand for dick, cause you sure have that taken care of.

r00d
I couldnt figure it out, i thought they were throwing dirt

Reading tags is a lost art.

Maybe... and just maybe, that's because a lot of artists put jokes in tags, rather than tag shit correctly. Henceforth noone bothers to read tags for THAT reason.

No need to be a prick about it. It took me a couple minutes to catch it myself.

Well excuse me Mr Smart Guy. It's also not that hard to see how some people would have trouble making out a monochrome sketch.

actually, i missed that detail, somewhere along the lines i had thought maybe someone's been hurt by a rocky snowball or something.

Watch out, its David Crownenberg.

Only one thing to say amazing and i want to know what coming next 0..0

Looking awesome dude <3

looks cool

Damn.

hee, nice to see more stuff from you again Zaush.

Perhaps I should look forward for a comic from you again soon?

I will keep an eye out for the otters as always!

Have a good week! ^^/

Looks cool!

Seems like it's rubbing off quite a bit. Love the dynamism.

You just had to use fennec foxes and make this all the sadder for me.

very nice looking dude. I like the bird guy

i cant fap to this

Where is My goddamn ressurection kit when its needed ?!

Looks sad... keep'em coming !

Oh the feelings, a good wordless comic you did

sad.... but that turned out really good so far, it has a nice flow. in my option, the cloaked bird would do with a more dynamic angle for his shots.

I need to work on my confidence, and start doing comics...haven't drawn even a double-frame page since I was in freshman year.

That little adorable cutie! ;w;

the golden rule is 6 panels per page. The first page should probably be split up. The other ones work well enough.

Also, a panel's width generally represents 'shot time'. You have some fast looking horizontal ones, and some slow looking tall ones. I dunno. Not bad, but you could do better.

Take a look into French comic layouts, 9+ per page is the standard for those.

Seems busy. I got nothing but reprimands for 12 panels on a page, but if it's standard elsewhere, carry on man.

I find the look really interesting, since Euro comics in general came from the necessity to pack in more information in each page (two plot points on average) due to constraints on page count. At the same time, euro comics and graphic novels are also larger format A4 (or sometimes bigger) for print. When I went into this workshop I was already pretty interested in the euro look, and the person who is instructing draws for the french market which seems to follow its own set of standards. Here's an example of his work: http://www.timmcburnie.com/pinocchio-2014/

Blacksad :3

its got joy, its got fear, its got sadness. you got a good story here. Kudo's.

I love sketches, but will these be flushed out for the class? Would be cool to see!

Yes, the class assignment will result in inked and colored pages.

Awesome! Sounds like it will be fun.

Last panels remind me of Hand of Fate...

looks neat so far.
sad lil story

Really nice work telling the story without words or showing anything traumatizing on panel. Neat!

So kind of like a tip of the hat to movies like "Bridge to Terabithia" and "My Girl".
Page one, death of a friend.
Page two: the funeral
And Page three: I get that he is given a picture that was ripped and discarded, but what is happening in the very last panel?

Since this is only 1-3 of about 6 or 7 pages, I don't expect anyone to understand what the last page is all about. I'll try and get those up in the next few days!

Coolz. ^w^

I was thinking some sort of deal-with-the-devil or broken-promise sort of plot with it. Definitely curious to see what happens next.

Whatever it is, it DEFINITELY won't result in a necrow controlling an army of undead fennecs and taking over the world in a storm of zombiEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... (s).

Very emotional!

That entire second page is heart-wrenching. I love the third row so much; god damn.

I think it's hard to instantly get that she fell through ice, but one reason for that is the trees. They look fluffy and full of leaves. If it were winter, shouldn't they be bare? And if they're pine, then that just means the shape of the trees are wrong. Changing these points would help with setting the scene, in my opinion. I'm only pointing this out because if the is for a grade in your class they might point that out. But this is over all very well done!

I think the finished version (well in progress) will clear things up a lot more.

Wow

what workshop did you use to learn this skill

Honestly you can learn a lot from just watching videos of other people paint and draw

Thank you for responding! I have tons of tut vids,but i just realized you put the title of the workshop in the description!

i got to study that cum you draw/paint it looks soo good!

Hope it helps! The workshop was actually specific to drawing for comics

i have been looking it up, there are tons of tuts out there. Thanks dude you are the best; no doubt, cant deny, art better than water, but dont ask me why!