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The first part of Oz's story. After looking at the first chapter and taking in suggestions, I realized the opening to her story was a little to heavy emotionally, plus you didn't get as much information about Oz herself, and therefore would not be able to relate to her. So I created a prelude of what her everyday life of travel would be like. Chapters to her story are soon to come!
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Engaging! The antics of the crowd(Especially the children!) Make it really believable. Loved the description of the market in the first paragraph; you really painted the scene into my mind with your words, and I could see it happening as I read the story. Please write more oh great Oz.
LOVE
THIS
Engaging! The antics of the crowd(Especially the children!) Make it really believable. Loved the description of the market in the first paragraph; you really painted the scene into my mind with your words, and I could see it happening as I read the story. Please write more oh great Oz.
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