First, I would like to warmly welcome you to FA c:
Secondly, if I may give a bit of gentle criticism; It is nice that you do have some wonderful rhymes and some pleasant word choice. However, a couple lines felt a little cut off and it hiccuped the flow once or twice.
As well, it seems set up a bit oddly [Though I do not know if it was just how the submission loaded for me]. Perhaps start a new line with each pair like:

"This would be the first line,
Followed by another.
By doing this you'll be just fine
And I'm sorry if I'm a bother."

I do apologize if I came off harsh at all for I do not mean to come off that way ;n;

No, thank you very much for telling me this, I will be sure to do it for the next one. I am always open to criticism :) and thanks for the welcome.

Then you're quite welcome for both things! c: