Hi again,

I really liked the built up of the story. The progression of the plot was very well done. Sometimes some humor in the mix and some more serious themes made it really inviting to read it all through at once! I also thought the personages in this story were interesting, all have a very different background. And you just threw them in quite the situation!

I also thought you did a great job describing elements in the universe, through Kassel’s point of view or though yours. It was actually very refreshing to read in such a different story style, then I am used to. I think you wrapped things up nicely at the end of the story. Even if a lot of things happened at the ending, the story and plot was still clear to me.

And sorry for the long delay, but I was quite busy the latest weeks (and will be the oncoming weeks). Which prevented me from reading this with a clear mind.

You really made another fantastic story again! So thank you for sharing them!

- Silent Moonlight Dragon

It's amazing to hear from you again, Silent. Doesn't matter how long it takes, you're just someone I look forward to hearing from. I know people get very busy around the school years. I just hope it gave you a nice break away from all the work.

I actually enjoyed this style a lot better as a writer. I found it was really quite fun to torment Kass after a while, as well as the others. I might do it again sometime, but I don't have a story prepared that would suit that style in mind just yet.

I liked the ending, but I felt like there wasn't very much explained on what exactly happened. It left it kinda shadowed in mystery and very open ended. But I'm happy with the conclusion overall. At least it a was a bit more clear this time.

You've done so much for me these past 5 months, Silent. I'm currently working on something I'm planning to release in December, but the next story, I'd like you to large say on it. What creatures do you want to see in it? What type of theme? Did you want sex in it? And what overall mood do you want the story to have? (being Drama, Romance, Humor, etc.) The only themes I'm not very good at are the more futuristic spacy ones, like Star Trek/Stargate/Star Wars. I did something along the lines of Firefly before, and that turned out alright, but.

Or did you want to see a continuation to another story? Perhaps a part from the past of Zhaiothe, Haytre or Kassel? Just don't give me "it doesn't matter" for an answer

Thank you again for everything! Hope things are going well for you, Silent. Much

Thank you for saying that! It's just I will be busy four more weeks and hopefully I will have a somewhat more doable workload from school stuff. Things are going well, just busy. But your stories are always great to read and get my mind on something else. And it is also likewise, nice hearing again from you!

I can imagine this style is not applicable to many situations, but it would indeed be great if it will be used in a later story.

I am very honored with your request, it makes me very happy you want to involve me! That means a lot! You are giving me too much, for the things I return.

I do not want to make it a burden for you if things I write here are not quite the idea you are looking for. But if you insist... here I go:

I like anything with dragons, but I really do not hate an involvement of any other kind of creatures (which can make things sometimes more interesting!). I am a fan of the romantic/adventure with some humor settings, like your writing styles so far! The question about sex, only add if fits to the situation and if involved it add some deeper meaning or emphasizes on the feelings between characters, not only for just because.

Or a story with Zhaiothe or Haytre would also be interesting, and I think would also be applicable with above. Even if it possibly would not, these characters are still very interesting! Haytre maybe a bit more because most of his past is still a mystery. But I would not say no to a story about Zhaiothe either! You are really making it difficult for me to make these choices!

But again, take my requests with a pinch of salt; If you come up with something entirely different, I am sure it will be still a very enjoyable read! I am easy to please with a writing style like yours!

I forgot to ask if you are doing better, it completely slipped my mind when writing my previous comment, so I hope you're doing fine! At the very least don't overstress to much while working and/or writing! Take care!

This is exactly what I was looking, and what I was hoping for! I got a few ideas swimming around, but nothing for a real plot yet. I'm not going to try to force it, but just thought I'd let you know that your answers were perfect.

I'll try not to spoil anything else, but it will be about a dragon. As for me, I'm doing alright. A little better now that the weather is cooling down. I don't think I've ever been so sick of summer/heat than this year I'll be fine once I start getting some sleep.

Thanks for helping me out on this one. I'll get around to it when I can, which might actually end up being a couple of weeks when I start it. Finishing? I really can't say. So far, they really only seem to take a few weeks to finish. I might end up having the first part done than the December one is released. Still, we'll see

I am glad to hear those answers where satisfactory, and good enough to get you going!

Ha, you're already making me curious! Ah yes, summer heat can sometimes be quite troublesome/tiresome in long periods of time. The weather here is also not ideal, almost day after day quite hot to quite cold. But hopefully you can catch up your sleep a bit soon!

Just take your time, it really is not much of a deal if you need some more. I will wait patiently! I am already really thankful you're even doing this!

And I apologize for starting new comments, instead of replying to them. I just forget to hit the 'reply to this post' button the entire time!