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Trios And Tribulations Chapter Two: Broken Innocence

By Sinwraith,
posted 11 years ago Writer

Part 2
Our group has arrived, but things seem to have changed...
Could've been better.....

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I think all you need to do is add more description. At one point you have Darius sitting on the edge of a window sill. That would've been a perfect time for a description of the buildings that surrounded the in.

Still, I enjoyed it. Sorry it took me so long to get to reading.

Sinwraith !sinwraith

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11 years ago

Thank you.
Oh my god, I dropped the ball on that one.
It was quite sloppy in my opinion.
Kazan told me that too.

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