Something I made for my friend. Maybe it can help someone.
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Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 34.9 kB
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Also, read it and thought it was rather interesting and a few people can be able to recognize themselves in it. Although, I personnaly would have handled it differently XD; I thought Torsten brought it up to Robert in a pretty crude way, instead of subtly asking him questions that would intend him to realize his own mistakes. But anyway... I thought it was an interesting short read.
I would encourage you to write more short stories; I think you have the natural ability to make the reader feel emotions by describing actions. Gestures and mean much more than speech.
Also, read it and thought it was rather interesting and a few people can be able to recognize themselves in it. Although, I personnaly would have handled it differently XD; I thought Torsten brought it up to Robert in a pretty crude way, instead of subtly asking him questions that would intend him to realize his own mistakes. But anyway... I thought it was an interesting short read.
I would encourage you to write more short stories; I think you have the natural ability to make the reader feel emotions by describing actions. Gestures and mean much more than speech.
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