THIS is an idea I know a lot of people tr to do, yet how many have try to do it for Archie?
as people know Archie said they will do the Chronicles story but much later, yet how will they work it, how many issues?
I know Archie not use any of my ideas but I did a script of a possible issue 1, I might do the rest maybe.
but what do you all think and should I continue this as draw it out?
here is my Sonic Chronicles Script
Sonic Chronicles
The Dark brotherhood
Story Title: The Dark brotherhood
Part:01
page01
screen: Eggman's forces are in disarray, his Death Egg destroyed and his Egg army all even captured or in hiding cause of their tires to Eggman.
as a fleet of GUN' air ships anre plains flying to the last place Eggman is hold up in, Metropolise, the city he made on the land what was once known as the kingdom of Acorn.
page02
Sonic and his friends had join the battle with GUN' to bring Eggman down for once and for all, as Eggman was now using an new Egg Carrier that had the power of his Death Egg, yet thank to Sonic and friends they stopped it energy flow as it begin to fall into the city below.
page03
as Sonic and his friends fly out of Eggman's Egg Carrier on their Bi plains, Eggman's new ship fall crashing down on his city and blowing up leaving an mess all over, no power no robots no nothing was left but wreck buildings and robot parts laying around.
page04
after the battle one, it seem almost pointless cause of all the damage to Eggman's city the chaos that happen in it, yet when Sonic his friends and GUN' looked all over, they couldn't find any sign of Eggman, his city off line all his Egg army's now captured or ran away.
Sonic his friends and GUN' had beaten Eggman and he was gone, hoping forever.
page05
months past as with no Eggman to fight, Sonic had gone running around the world, as standing still is not his way.
he just game back to green hill zone when he hear a beeping sound on his com-link watch that hidden under his glove, it was Tails.
Sonic looks at the image of Tails and smiles to his friend,
Tails: SONIC! we got Trouble!
Tails say with an partly scared face.
Sonic: woo, woo Tails calm down what wrong? also no hello after all this time?
just then Sally move her head next to Tails on the Screen.
Sally: Sonic we been trying to contract you for Days we need you here NOW, Knuckles has gone missing and so has the Chaos emeralds!
Sally tell Sonic in an unhappy mood.
Sally: why couldn't you answer our calls?
Sonic: errr I kind of had the com-link turned off, I thought best save power as I don't really stop to recharge it.
he says rubbing the back of his head with an worried smile, as he feel Sally gonna yell at him.
page06
Sally signs and looks at Sonic as she just continue to explain what going on.
Sally: Sonic just hurry, we think this new group of Criminals calling themselves the Marauders took Knuckles and the chaos emeralds, Sonic we need your help!
Sonic rubs the back of his head thinking for a second.
Sonic: wait these guys took Knuckles, man he really letting himself go an't he? heheh.
Sally: SONIC this is no time for Jokes hurry over here, I sent Amy to meet you half, then you meet us in Tails' workshop in Central City.
Sonic: Amy!... why do I have to meet up with her?
Sally: cause she can always find you now hope to it Sonic and hurry here!
Sally signs as the screen turn off. as Sally walk away from Tails' computer screen.
Tails: everything be alright Sally now that Sonic is back.
Sally: I hope so Tails I hope so.
she says with a worried look on her face.
Page07
Sonic was on his way when some old rusty looking badniks had come out of no where on his way to meet up with Amy Rose, there is a horde of them as Sonic fighting them off.
Sonic: woo what going on here, I thought all Eggman's badniks was all took out by GUN' in each zone! oh well more fun for me.
Sonic was having fun when the horde boss which looked like an old swatbot was able to grab Sonic as his guard was down thinking these rust buckets are no danger to him.
Sonic: ARR oh man not good!
just them an poke, poke hammer come out of no where smashing the swatbot from the top of its head to the ground as it was Amy Rose smashing it.
Amy: HANDS OFF OF SONIC!
Amy yells out as it was the last badnik to get rid of.
page08
Sonic: woo thank Amy I owe you one.
Amy: you sure do Sonic, your just lucky I came along!
Sonic rubs the back of his head feel Amy was about to say her feelings all out to him once gain but.
Amy: I am glad your ok Sonic but! I got an boyfriend now, his name is Dexter so your no longer Number 1 to me.
Sonic hearing this a bit shocked but feel it must be one of Amy's little plans to hook up with him.
Sonic: ... Dexter really?... anyway we should get to the City, Sally and Tails are waiting for us.
Amy: WHY are you being like that I just Saved YOU!
Amy Yells at Sonic
page09
Sonic: err I'm sorry Amy but Sal' said I had to hurry.
he say to her backing away hoping not to get hit by her hammer.
Amy: Tails workshop in Central city is at the north-eastern area, I'll show you where Sonic!
she say in an unhappy mood.
Sonic pick up Amy and speeds off to the city as he says to Amy*
Sonic: I said I am sorry Amy!
Amy: Just don't get any ideas I got a boyfriend now Sonic!
at a bridge that lead into Central city, an dark figures was waiting as Sonic stop before them.
darkfigure: That's far enough Hedgehogs!
the dark figure say to Sonic as he stand there ready for them.
page10
Amy: Sonic Its one of them the Marauder!
darkfigure: is that what everyone of you are calling us? Quaint.
Sonic put Amy down as he ask the Marauder a question.
Sonic: Why not you just tell us where your keeping Knuckles?
Marauder: I am not here to answer your questions, Commander Shade sent me to Stop you, that is all you need to know
Sonic: who is Shade?... has Shadow change his name?
Marauder: Now, now hedgehog why would I tell you!
Amy: Sonic these guys are far Stronger than Eggman's Egg army's and his badniks put together!
she try to explain to sonic.
Sonic: well that what make it more fun!
page11
Sonic and Amy begin to fight the Marauder as he was just as Amy say, harder to beat than Eggman's old Egg army's and badniks.
yet as a Team Sonic and Amy had the upper hand working together, as Sonic goes into a spin dash and Amy hit him with her hammer sending him flying at the Marauder.
yet before sonic hit him the Marauder just vanish in some short of Teleporting light or that is what it seems like.
page 12
skidding on the ground to stop him self from Amy's powerful hit as he didn't hit anything to stop himself.
Sonic: What there, where did he go?
Amy: I don't know Sonic but they pull that trick all the time to.
Sonic: let hurry I am sure Tails night have an answer to this, when he Rotor and Nicole work together no one can hid from them for long.
at tails workshop in the city Tails and Nicole was going over some readings as Rotor working on the computer to try get it to lock on the energy signal that the Marauders are using to teleport away.
Sally: any leads yet you guys?
she ask them all.
Tails: sorry Sally we got nothing...
Nicole: its weird its like the energy goes no where...
just then Sonic walks in with Amy
page 13
Sonic: HAY Guys!
Sally: well its about time Sonic
Sally say not looking happy at him.
Tails: Sonic!
Rotor: hay Sonic
Sonic bump fist with Rotor and one arm hugs Tails
Sonic: so what yea guys been up to, but first how did Knuckles get captured?
Tails begin to tell Sonic
Tails: he came to me asking for help, as he found out someone had stolen the emeralds from many place's, we use one he had to set up a trap.
but when the Marauders came they took the emerald jamming my trap and overcome Knuckles with sheer numbers!
page14
Sonic looked a bit puzzled.
Sonic: wait, wait a min they jammed one of your machines? and beat Knuckles HOW?
Tails has a worried look on his face as he looks away rubbing his own arm explaining more.
Tails: they had very high tech machines with them Sonic... and one second they there and the next they was gone, Knuckles with them...
Sonic: me and Amy beat one of them on our way here, he said something about someone named Shade?
Nicole: we been looking up files or anything on these guys but there no names or anything... who ever this Shade is could be far stronger than the ones we face already.
Sally: anyway Sonic, we need a plan and GUN' want to help us so we gonna go meet with them now that your here.
Sonic: then what are we waiting for let go.
page 15
the group head out of Tails workshop only to be stopped by a group of Rusted Badniks and swatbots.
Sonic: not again Eggman's Robots
Sally: what? is Eggman back at a time like this?
Nicole: I don't think this is Eggman's doing, these are his old models and look they coved in rust.
Sonic: even so they seem a little harder to beat, Don't hold back!
the group begin to fight the badniks
page16
they fight hard not holding back as they watching each other's back when there is only one swatbot left, yet it was smash by Rouge the bat.
Rouge: well, well so the blue boy is back, did yea miss me hunny?
Amy: Grrrrr
Rouge looks at Amy.
Rouge: what you getting mad at, don't you have a boyfriend now?
amy: ...I just think Sonic too good for the likes of you that all!
Sally: Rouge I take it your here to lead us to GUN' Commander right?
Rouge; that right your highness just follow me.
Sonic: hay Rouge where Shadow? don't you 2 hang out still?
page17
Rouge: his been gone for some months now, he think Eggman still out there plotting and he doesn't want to give him the chance.
Sonic: yep that sound like Shadow heheh.
at a hidden cave, Knuckles Chain up as he isn't happy looking at the one known as Commander Shade.
Knuckles: when I get free your all gonna pay for this!
Shade: ...
Knuckles: What are you all planning, the Chaos emerald are Dangerous!
Shade: we just want to come home...
Knuckles: what!?!
page18
Shade: ... sorry time to sleep lights out!
Shade hits knuckles knocking him out again.
back in the city at GUN' HQ
Gun'commander: aww your highness good to see you all here.
Sally: we are here as you ask Commander, so let get to planning on finding Knuckles and the chaos emeralds.
Gun'Commander: before that we believe now that the Marauders have all the chaos emeralds, they might be likely to go after the master emerald next.
Sonic: and cause they captured Knuckles the master emerald is unguarded.
Gun'Commander: the Master emerald has my GUN Troopers watching it, but also we might have a lead on the Marauders hid outs.
page19
the commander bring up 2 maps showing the green hill zone and the city.
Sonic: hay I know them places, they are Eggman's old hideouts.
Tails: does that mean the Marauders are the ones sending Eggman's robots after us?
Sally: its more like they trying to cause some chaos so we have more trouble finding them.
Gun'Commander: this info is thank to Team Chaotic's but right you all must check these hideouts, as these Marauders have my main troops at Angel island.
Rouge will go with you.
Sally: fine, come on guys let go.
Rouge: ohh this is gonna be fun.
page 20
Sally: let hope Knuckles is at one of these places.
Sonic: knowing Knuckles he be more trouble for them right now.
the freedom fights and Rouge heading out to the old Eggman hidouts.
To be continues
as people know Archie said they will do the Chronicles story but much later, yet how will they work it, how many issues?
I know Archie not use any of my ideas but I did a script of a possible issue 1, I might do the rest maybe.
but what do you all think and should I continue this as draw it out?
here is my Sonic Chronicles Script
Sonic Chronicles
The Dark brotherhood
Story Title: The Dark brotherhood
Part:01
page01
screen: Eggman's forces are in disarray, his Death Egg destroyed and his Egg army all even captured or in hiding cause of their tires to Eggman.
as a fleet of GUN' air ships anre plains flying to the last place Eggman is hold up in, Metropolise, the city he made on the land what was once known as the kingdom of Acorn.
page02
Sonic and his friends had join the battle with GUN' to bring Eggman down for once and for all, as Eggman was now using an new Egg Carrier that had the power of his Death Egg, yet thank to Sonic and friends they stopped it energy flow as it begin to fall into the city below.
page03
as Sonic and his friends fly out of Eggman's Egg Carrier on their Bi plains, Eggman's new ship fall crashing down on his city and blowing up leaving an mess all over, no power no robots no nothing was left but wreck buildings and robot parts laying around.
page04
after the battle one, it seem almost pointless cause of all the damage to Eggman's city the chaos that happen in it, yet when Sonic his friends and GUN' looked all over, they couldn't find any sign of Eggman, his city off line all his Egg army's now captured or ran away.
Sonic his friends and GUN' had beaten Eggman and he was gone, hoping forever.
page05
months past as with no Eggman to fight, Sonic had gone running around the world, as standing still is not his way.
he just game back to green hill zone when he hear a beeping sound on his com-link watch that hidden under his glove, it was Tails.
Sonic looks at the image of Tails and smiles to his friend,
Tails: SONIC! we got Trouble!
Tails say with an partly scared face.
Sonic: woo, woo Tails calm down what wrong? also no hello after all this time?
just then Sally move her head next to Tails on the Screen.
Sally: Sonic we been trying to contract you for Days we need you here NOW, Knuckles has gone missing and so has the Chaos emeralds!
Sally tell Sonic in an unhappy mood.
Sally: why couldn't you answer our calls?
Sonic: errr I kind of had the com-link turned off, I thought best save power as I don't really stop to recharge it.
he says rubbing the back of his head with an worried smile, as he feel Sally gonna yell at him.
page06
Sally signs and looks at Sonic as she just continue to explain what going on.
Sally: Sonic just hurry, we think this new group of Criminals calling themselves the Marauders took Knuckles and the chaos emeralds, Sonic we need your help!
Sonic rubs the back of his head thinking for a second.
Sonic: wait these guys took Knuckles, man he really letting himself go an't he? heheh.
Sally: SONIC this is no time for Jokes hurry over here, I sent Amy to meet you half, then you meet us in Tails' workshop in Central City.
Sonic: Amy!... why do I have to meet up with her?
Sally: cause she can always find you now hope to it Sonic and hurry here!
Sally signs as the screen turn off. as Sally walk away from Tails' computer screen.
Tails: everything be alright Sally now that Sonic is back.
Sally: I hope so Tails I hope so.
she says with a worried look on her face.
Page07
Sonic was on his way when some old rusty looking badniks had come out of no where on his way to meet up with Amy Rose, there is a horde of them as Sonic fighting them off.
Sonic: woo what going on here, I thought all Eggman's badniks was all took out by GUN' in each zone! oh well more fun for me.
Sonic was having fun when the horde boss which looked like an old swatbot was able to grab Sonic as his guard was down thinking these rust buckets are no danger to him.
Sonic: ARR oh man not good!
just them an poke, poke hammer come out of no where smashing the swatbot from the top of its head to the ground as it was Amy Rose smashing it.
Amy: HANDS OFF OF SONIC!
Amy yells out as it was the last badnik to get rid of.
page08
Sonic: woo thank Amy I owe you one.
Amy: you sure do Sonic, your just lucky I came along!
Sonic rubs the back of his head feel Amy was about to say her feelings all out to him once gain but.
Amy: I am glad your ok Sonic but! I got an boyfriend now, his name is Dexter so your no longer Number 1 to me.
Sonic hearing this a bit shocked but feel it must be one of Amy's little plans to hook up with him.
Sonic: ... Dexter really?... anyway we should get to the City, Sally and Tails are waiting for us.
Amy: WHY are you being like that I just Saved YOU!
Amy Yells at Sonic
page09
Sonic: err I'm sorry Amy but Sal' said I had to hurry.
he say to her backing away hoping not to get hit by her hammer.
Amy: Tails workshop in Central city is at the north-eastern area, I'll show you where Sonic!
she say in an unhappy mood.
Sonic pick up Amy and speeds off to the city as he says to Amy*
Sonic: I said I am sorry Amy!
Amy: Just don't get any ideas I got a boyfriend now Sonic!
at a bridge that lead into Central city, an dark figures was waiting as Sonic stop before them.
darkfigure: That's far enough Hedgehogs!
the dark figure say to Sonic as he stand there ready for them.
page10
Amy: Sonic Its one of them the Marauder!
darkfigure: is that what everyone of you are calling us? Quaint.
Sonic put Amy down as he ask the Marauder a question.
Sonic: Why not you just tell us where your keeping Knuckles?
Marauder: I am not here to answer your questions, Commander Shade sent me to Stop you, that is all you need to know
Sonic: who is Shade?... has Shadow change his name?
Marauder: Now, now hedgehog why would I tell you!
Amy: Sonic these guys are far Stronger than Eggman's Egg army's and his badniks put together!
she try to explain to sonic.
Sonic: well that what make it more fun!
page11
Sonic and Amy begin to fight the Marauder as he was just as Amy say, harder to beat than Eggman's old Egg army's and badniks.
yet as a Team Sonic and Amy had the upper hand working together, as Sonic goes into a spin dash and Amy hit him with her hammer sending him flying at the Marauder.
yet before sonic hit him the Marauder just vanish in some short of Teleporting light or that is what it seems like.
page 12
skidding on the ground to stop him self from Amy's powerful hit as he didn't hit anything to stop himself.
Sonic: What there, where did he go?
Amy: I don't know Sonic but they pull that trick all the time to.
Sonic: let hurry I am sure Tails night have an answer to this, when he Rotor and Nicole work together no one can hid from them for long.
at tails workshop in the city Tails and Nicole was going over some readings as Rotor working on the computer to try get it to lock on the energy signal that the Marauders are using to teleport away.
Sally: any leads yet you guys?
she ask them all.
Tails: sorry Sally we got nothing...
Nicole: its weird its like the energy goes no where...
just then Sonic walks in with Amy
page 13
Sonic: HAY Guys!
Sally: well its about time Sonic
Sally say not looking happy at him.
Tails: Sonic!
Rotor: hay Sonic
Sonic bump fist with Rotor and one arm hugs Tails
Sonic: so what yea guys been up to, but first how did Knuckles get captured?
Tails begin to tell Sonic
Tails: he came to me asking for help, as he found out someone had stolen the emeralds from many place's, we use one he had to set up a trap.
but when the Marauders came they took the emerald jamming my trap and overcome Knuckles with sheer numbers!
page14
Sonic looked a bit puzzled.
Sonic: wait, wait a min they jammed one of your machines? and beat Knuckles HOW?
Tails has a worried look on his face as he looks away rubbing his own arm explaining more.
Tails: they had very high tech machines with them Sonic... and one second they there and the next they was gone, Knuckles with them...
Sonic: me and Amy beat one of them on our way here, he said something about someone named Shade?
Nicole: we been looking up files or anything on these guys but there no names or anything... who ever this Shade is could be far stronger than the ones we face already.
Sally: anyway Sonic, we need a plan and GUN' want to help us so we gonna go meet with them now that your here.
Sonic: then what are we waiting for let go.
page 15
the group head out of Tails workshop only to be stopped by a group of Rusted Badniks and swatbots.
Sonic: not again Eggman's Robots
Sally: what? is Eggman back at a time like this?
Nicole: I don't think this is Eggman's doing, these are his old models and look they coved in rust.
Sonic: even so they seem a little harder to beat, Don't hold back!
the group begin to fight the badniks
page16
they fight hard not holding back as they watching each other's back when there is only one swatbot left, yet it was smash by Rouge the bat.
Rouge: well, well so the blue boy is back, did yea miss me hunny?
Amy: Grrrrr
Rouge looks at Amy.
Rouge: what you getting mad at, don't you have a boyfriend now?
amy: ...I just think Sonic too good for the likes of you that all!
Sally: Rouge I take it your here to lead us to GUN' Commander right?
Rouge; that right your highness just follow me.
Sonic: hay Rouge where Shadow? don't you 2 hang out still?
page17
Rouge: his been gone for some months now, he think Eggman still out there plotting and he doesn't want to give him the chance.
Sonic: yep that sound like Shadow heheh.
at a hidden cave, Knuckles Chain up as he isn't happy looking at the one known as Commander Shade.
Knuckles: when I get free your all gonna pay for this!
Shade: ...
Knuckles: What are you all planning, the Chaos emerald are Dangerous!
Shade: we just want to come home...
Knuckles: what!?!
page18
Shade: ... sorry time to sleep lights out!
Shade hits knuckles knocking him out again.
back in the city at GUN' HQ
Gun'commander: aww your highness good to see you all here.
Sally: we are here as you ask Commander, so let get to planning on finding Knuckles and the chaos emeralds.
Gun'Commander: before that we believe now that the Marauders have all the chaos emeralds, they might be likely to go after the master emerald next.
Sonic: and cause they captured Knuckles the master emerald is unguarded.
Gun'Commander: the Master emerald has my GUN Troopers watching it, but also we might have a lead on the Marauders hid outs.
page19
the commander bring up 2 maps showing the green hill zone and the city.
Sonic: hay I know them places, they are Eggman's old hideouts.
Tails: does that mean the Marauders are the ones sending Eggman's robots after us?
Sally: its more like they trying to cause some chaos so we have more trouble finding them.
Gun'Commander: this info is thank to Team Chaotic's but right you all must check these hideouts, as these Marauders have my main troops at Angel island.
Rouge will go with you.
Sally: fine, come on guys let go.
Rouge: ohh this is gonna be fun.
page 20
Sally: let hope Knuckles is at one of these places.
Sonic: knowing Knuckles he be more trouble for them right now.
the freedom fights and Rouge heading out to the old Eggman hidouts.
To be continues
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