I cannot read it unfortunately

Mhm, I was afraid of that. I'll try and fix it.

There, I think that's the only format left that will work. I cant use plain text because for some reason it completely fucks up the quotation marks. Sorry about that.

Nope sorry :/

...okay, I'll try something after I get home from class.

Yeah im pretty sure the only way would be you did the whole story in the comment section.
But thats about it.

Okay, I got it fixed. Everyone should be able to read it now.

I've filled the comment section enough I feel with my babbleing, so I'll just say very well done and the anticipation for each part increases with every sentence I read ^^

Thanks Scale, I was worried things might be getting a bit boring. I'm happy to actually be building anticipation.

Woo buddy. Nice job.
You should totes do this for NaNoWriMo, if Ye have heard of that. It'd be fun seeing this as a longer novel...

Thanks a lot Ze, there's much more to come. I've not heard of this NaNoWriMo, what is it exactly?

Stands for National November Writing Month. Is basically a writing challenge for authors and writers. Goal is to simply write a 50,000 word novel in the month of November.
They got more on it online ^.^ I suggest you enter; I already have.

Best one yet. Oh. My. Cod.

Errors were pretty much non-existent save for the grammar tidbits hither and thither, but that was it.

Everything else was just a whirlwind of excellent description and emotional portrayal. When Sataern entered, you could just feel the tension dripping. The Magecat Kids (that is now their title © me sucka!) evolved from having quirks to flat out entertaining and engaging personalities that just put a smile on my face (Mytll you are my Lord and Saviour). A little peak at the lore, but held back to paint a pleasant, and at times unnerving, dinner setting that is one for the ages.

The writing in this was as delicious as the food descriptions (like holy jeez Tycho). It just keeps getting better and better with each entry. Not much more I can say but . Keep up the legendary work.

Thank you very much Damien, I'm actually surprised and glad you enjoyed it so much. I was worried when I was working on this, I don't have a lot of experience with writing in multiple characters that have relationships with the protagonist. Making secondary characters interesting is important to me, almost as much as the primary ones, I feel its the most important part of making the reader get immersed in the story.

Anyway, thanks again for the compliments and continued feedback, it really helps me continue working. I'm going to start working on the fourth part along with my latest requested story soon. Stay tuned!