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I just did this on writing.com
http://www.writing.com/main/interac.....als/map/135132
and i really like it.
It'll be cool with someone continued this story.
You will end a (free) account to view it and add to it.
http://www.writing.com/main/interac.....als/map/135132
and i really like it.
It'll be cool with someone continued this story.
You will end a (free) account to view it and add to it.
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Avian (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 14.5 kB
It's a good starting point, and I like the fact that you're making a parrot grow, as macro parrots seem to be rather rare. However, you need to go through this again and clean up the spelling mistakes, as I saw quite a few while reading. If you're not already using one, i'd recommend finding a spellchecking software.
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