Yes, that's a very dramatic conclusion to the chapter. I'm really glad that Kain appreciates the gravity of what Kitten has sacrificed in giving herself to him. Some guys just wouldn't get that.

What I really liked about this submission was the way you described the online conversation between Kitten and Teffy. It perfectly captures the tension and anticipation of an IM exchange heavy with emotional content.

Lovely work yet again.

thanks. i'm still pretty proud of that IM conversation- i used my own MANY experiences as reference, i'm glad i got it right.
I do have to say my fav part is seeing Kain's realization at the end of the chapter.

[= I like Kain, he's so sweet. xD I'm glad he realized what he did, but it sucks because he's probably going to feel so horrible about it. [= Ending with the realization was a wonderful idea. =] You're an amazing writer.

thank you! >^.^< i love drama- and i'm getting pretty good at it- didja read the stuff before episode 7? this is much more entertaining if you read em. >^.^< just curious.

xD Does chapter 6 count? I was just about to read the other chapters, hee hee. :D

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, i feel sooo sorry for kitten...
i hope it works out soon, and she finds who she realy loves.
cant wait to read the next installment

thanks for reading em all and commenting <3! >^.^<
Yeah Kitten isn't quite as innocent as you'd think- so don't feel TOO sorry for her >^.~<.
Stay tuned- it only gets better >^.^<

yay, when is the next episode?

oops >^.^< lemme work on that

Well, I've only reccently found your stories, but I like what I read. Not only do you have a well-written, gramatically correct, punctuated, and spaced story, it has an awsome plotline and enough yiffage to keep people interested without making it a blatant pr0n novel.

Love what you've done so far, can't wait to see what comes next.

thank you! >^.^< i get more "you have great grammar and spelling!" on here than i ever have before *laughs*
I'm glad above all that you're enjoying the story- i can't claim i balanced it right on purpose- >.> it was purely a selfish writing.