
I was trying to create a new villain for Lost in Space, adn this is the result.
She is cold, calculating and basically not thinking like we do. She is, in short, completely alien in her way of thinking.
I wasn't planning on adding/getting the whole alien theme down, but it just sorta happened..
Having escaped from the infected station and back on smaller vessel heading to Mother.
I'm with Magicka and darkie and looking out at the now oozing black goo station as I comment, “so.. You guys think we got away from those things?”
Magicka looks out too beside me, “I think so.. I doubt they got any spaceships to follow us..”
And then suddenly we hear someone that doesn't belong on Mother comment, “we don't have any spaceships, because we don't need them..”
Turning around and I see her standing there, a bit taller than my usual vixen and covered in black fur, as black as the middle of the night, and with almost glowing red eyes to boot.
She is looking like she's a wild animal, and an apex predator, someone that's at the top of the food chain and doesn't have to flee from any predators. And she's not wearing anything, nothing at all.
She has bigger breasts, a flat belly and stronger looking legs and arms.
I look over at her, “oohh~ Hey there.” getting just a bit closer as I ask, “say.. dinner and a movie followed by a trip to my bedroom for a night of rough loving sounds good to you, maybe?”
she smiles at me sadly, “sorry, but my calender's all full the new few weeks.. You know how it is.. So much stuff to clean out and destroy..” and lifts her arms, “speaking of which.” before grinning, “sorry sweetie, but you won't be around for much longer..”
two glowy black portals with purple lightning appears flowing behind her and some kind of fourlegged beasts starts crawling out. They're black with gooey like bodies, like they're covered in some kind of goo or gunk, like she'd dug them out in a swamp. The first few line up behind her as they just keep crawling, and now they look like they're floating out of the portal in a thick and gooey substance. The individual creatures pulling themselves out of the gooey slithering mass that's growing in front of the portal.
I'm still processing the 'gorgeous nude vixen' and that she seems to be not trying to hump me.
Darkie grabs me and pulls me out of the room as she says, “Fair? You can focus on dating her, banging her, tying her u and fucking her brains out or hypnotize her. Whatever you want. Just helps us get rid of her pets first, ok?”
I look up at her, and then at Magicka and the now sealed door keeping her pets from trying to eat us.
“Sure Darkie, we get rid of her pets and then we see if I can't drag her out on that date..”
Darkie nods and smiles at me, “sure.. Now do we have any ideas on how to get rid of those things?”
Magicka shrugs, “what are they.. I think finding out what they are is a better idea.. I need to know what they are because I can work on getting rid of them..” and looks over at Darkie, “I think both her and their.. Whatever she calls herself is from the void?”
Darkie looks over at the door, “they have might have been from the void originally, but those oozing things.. That's not anything in the void that'd look like that..” and back at Magicka, “they might have been void creatures once, but if they were they're corrupted now..”
I look at them both, “uuhh.. anyone have any idea on how to stop those things?” before back at the door where they seem to be throwing themselves at the metal wall repeatedly.
More of the crew have gathered and is looking for direction now, like how to deal with these things that's making quite a bit of noise now and if we maybe should leave here.
I look over them all as I ask a bit louder than before, “so.. Anyone has any idea on what to do here?”
I see Aurora piping up, “well.. try freezing them, maybe? I know cold has a not too good effect on most creatures.. So try freezing them out?”
Magicka looks over, “sure, we already know fire and metal doesn't do anything to those creatures.”
Aurora nods and smiles before pushing her hands up against the wall beside the door and starts channeling her energy out and into the adjoining room.
The temperature quickly drops and bigger chunks of ice starts to form on the walls and surrounding the alien mass too, causing it to slow down, it's movement starting to get sluggish before they seem to be frozen in a solid ice cube.
Magicka looks inside as she says, “I think that did..” and stops before sounding annoyed, “oh for.. She can create fireballs too..?” before looking around as she calls out, “I think we need to..” and just yells, “Run for it!” as some heavy thuds hits the door again and again.
We all start backing away from the now bulging door, the frame starting to to get pushed out of shape and I can see of the beings looking at me hungrily. And not in the good way hungrily, more in the 'I'll eat you all up, leaving nothing behind.'
And then it happens, the door flies open with a heavy thud and the creaking sound of metal getting forced out of shape.
The anthro vixen from earlier steps out and looks over us, her pets gathering around her and still looking at us hungrily, “now.. Are you done with your cheap tricks? You're just prolonging your own demise..”
I look up at her and start backing away, the rest of the crew already having taken off away from the alien vixen and down towards the escape pods. “well.. I think it's just what living creatures do. We take off running if it means we'll survive a few seconds longer..” and grins, “we'll have to arrange a date some other time..” before taking off, running as fast as I can down towards the escape pods too.
She freezes and seems to ponder the date for a fraction of a second before pointing and yelling, “enough with the games, go my pets. Go and sate your insatiable hunger.. Go and feast, and spare no one! Especially not that goddamned fox.”
Behind me and I can almost hear their slippery footsteps as they get closer and closer, their breath hitting me, and it sells like something very rotten someone dug out somewhere and it's retching.
I finally make it to one of the last available escape pods and hitting the closing mechanism before I'm even fully inside. I really don't want one of those things in here with me.
The escape pot closes shut with a hydraulic hiss as the air settles in and it's seals itself hermetically, and then I hear a loud splotch, like when you throw a water balloon at a wall and black tentacled of what look look like a thick black liquid covering part of the window.
I lean back a bit, looking at the growling creatures as the escape pod starts drift away. I can still see her swearing about me and how she'll take her revenge on me next time she finds me.
I sigh, feeling happy I got away from her and turn as I let myself collapse against the door, finally feeling safe again.
I see Aurora sitting there, smiling at me softly as she leans back and pets her lap, “hey Fair. Seems we got a few hours to ourselves.. Just you and me..”
I nod and smile at her tiredly, “yeah, sure seems like it.” before making my way over and, doing as she suggested, settles in in her lap and just rests in against her.
Aurora pulls me in against her tightly as she whispers, “it's ok now Fair. We all got off that shuttle.. We're all here now..” and kisses my forehead softly.
any thoughts on this kind of writing?
This is the first time I tried it and I think I wrote that in about 3 hours.
Yes, both her and her 'pets' will show up in Liost In Space at some point.
So.. Any idea on how to defeat those things?
She is cold, calculating and basically not thinking like we do. She is, in short, completely alien in her way of thinking.
I wasn't planning on adding/getting the whole alien theme down, but it just sorta happened..
Having escaped from the infected station and back on smaller vessel heading to Mother.
I'm with Magicka and darkie and looking out at the now oozing black goo station as I comment, “so.. You guys think we got away from those things?”
Magicka looks out too beside me, “I think so.. I doubt they got any spaceships to follow us..”
And then suddenly we hear someone that doesn't belong on Mother comment, “we don't have any spaceships, because we don't need them..”
Turning around and I see her standing there, a bit taller than my usual vixen and covered in black fur, as black as the middle of the night, and with almost glowing red eyes to boot.
She is looking like she's a wild animal, and an apex predator, someone that's at the top of the food chain and doesn't have to flee from any predators. And she's not wearing anything, nothing at all.
She has bigger breasts, a flat belly and stronger looking legs and arms.
I look over at her, “oohh~ Hey there.” getting just a bit closer as I ask, “say.. dinner and a movie followed by a trip to my bedroom for a night of rough loving sounds good to you, maybe?”
she smiles at me sadly, “sorry, but my calender's all full the new few weeks.. You know how it is.. So much stuff to clean out and destroy..” and lifts her arms, “speaking of which.” before grinning, “sorry sweetie, but you won't be around for much longer..”
two glowy black portals with purple lightning appears flowing behind her and some kind of fourlegged beasts starts crawling out. They're black with gooey like bodies, like they're covered in some kind of goo or gunk, like she'd dug them out in a swamp. The first few line up behind her as they just keep crawling, and now they look like they're floating out of the portal in a thick and gooey substance. The individual creatures pulling themselves out of the gooey slithering mass that's growing in front of the portal.
I'm still processing the 'gorgeous nude vixen' and that she seems to be not trying to hump me.
Darkie grabs me and pulls me out of the room as she says, “Fair? You can focus on dating her, banging her, tying her u and fucking her brains out or hypnotize her. Whatever you want. Just helps us get rid of her pets first, ok?”
I look up at her, and then at Magicka and the now sealed door keeping her pets from trying to eat us.
“Sure Darkie, we get rid of her pets and then we see if I can't drag her out on that date..”
Darkie nods and smiles at me, “sure.. Now do we have any ideas on how to get rid of those things?”
Magicka shrugs, “what are they.. I think finding out what they are is a better idea.. I need to know what they are because I can work on getting rid of them..” and looks over at Darkie, “I think both her and their.. Whatever she calls herself is from the void?”
Darkie looks over at the door, “they have might have been from the void originally, but those oozing things.. That's not anything in the void that'd look like that..” and back at Magicka, “they might have been void creatures once, but if they were they're corrupted now..”
I look at them both, “uuhh.. anyone have any idea on how to stop those things?” before back at the door where they seem to be throwing themselves at the metal wall repeatedly.
More of the crew have gathered and is looking for direction now, like how to deal with these things that's making quite a bit of noise now and if we maybe should leave here.
I look over them all as I ask a bit louder than before, “so.. Anyone has any idea on what to do here?”
I see Aurora piping up, “well.. try freezing them, maybe? I know cold has a not too good effect on most creatures.. So try freezing them out?”
Magicka looks over, “sure, we already know fire and metal doesn't do anything to those creatures.”
Aurora nods and smiles before pushing her hands up against the wall beside the door and starts channeling her energy out and into the adjoining room.
The temperature quickly drops and bigger chunks of ice starts to form on the walls and surrounding the alien mass too, causing it to slow down, it's movement starting to get sluggish before they seem to be frozen in a solid ice cube.
Magicka looks inside as she says, “I think that did..” and stops before sounding annoyed, “oh for.. She can create fireballs too..?” before looking around as she calls out, “I think we need to..” and just yells, “Run for it!” as some heavy thuds hits the door again and again.
We all start backing away from the now bulging door, the frame starting to to get pushed out of shape and I can see of the beings looking at me hungrily. And not in the good way hungrily, more in the 'I'll eat you all up, leaving nothing behind.'
And then it happens, the door flies open with a heavy thud and the creaking sound of metal getting forced out of shape.
The anthro vixen from earlier steps out and looks over us, her pets gathering around her and still looking at us hungrily, “now.. Are you done with your cheap tricks? You're just prolonging your own demise..”
I look up at her and start backing away, the rest of the crew already having taken off away from the alien vixen and down towards the escape pods. “well.. I think it's just what living creatures do. We take off running if it means we'll survive a few seconds longer..” and grins, “we'll have to arrange a date some other time..” before taking off, running as fast as I can down towards the escape pods too.
She freezes and seems to ponder the date for a fraction of a second before pointing and yelling, “enough with the games, go my pets. Go and sate your insatiable hunger.. Go and feast, and spare no one! Especially not that goddamned fox.”
Behind me and I can almost hear their slippery footsteps as they get closer and closer, their breath hitting me, and it sells like something very rotten someone dug out somewhere and it's retching.
I finally make it to one of the last available escape pods and hitting the closing mechanism before I'm even fully inside. I really don't want one of those things in here with me.
The escape pot closes shut with a hydraulic hiss as the air settles in and it's seals itself hermetically, and then I hear a loud splotch, like when you throw a water balloon at a wall and black tentacled of what look look like a thick black liquid covering part of the window.
I lean back a bit, looking at the growling creatures as the escape pod starts drift away. I can still see her swearing about me and how she'll take her revenge on me next time she finds me.
I sigh, feeling happy I got away from her and turn as I let myself collapse against the door, finally feeling safe again.
I see Aurora sitting there, smiling at me softly as she leans back and pets her lap, “hey Fair. Seems we got a few hours to ourselves.. Just you and me..”
I nod and smile at her tiredly, “yeah, sure seems like it.” before making my way over and, doing as she suggested, settles in in her lap and just rests in against her.
Aurora pulls me in against her tightly as she whispers, “it's ok now Fair. We all got off that shuttle.. We're all here now..” and kisses my forehead softly.
any thoughts on this kind of writing?
This is the first time I tried it and I think I wrote that in about 3 hours.
Yes, both her and her 'pets' will show up in Liost In Space at some point.
So.. Any idea on how to defeat those things?
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I just wanted to try out somethign completely different.
at first I justr wanted a girl I couldn't bedf 5 seconds after meeting her, but it took on a life of it's own.
And I know I got a guardian, we'll see if he's worth anything :P I mean I know he's worth a bit of loving and so on..
at first I justr wanted a girl I couldn't bedf 5 seconds after meeting her, but it took on a life of it's own.
And I know I got a guardian, we'll see if he's worth anything :P I mean I know he's worth a bit of loving and so on..
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