that was really really nice... I enjoyed it a lot CJ

did you begin your training yet?

V.

Interstate 80, about to enter Wyoming? Was Devon in Nebraska?

Sorry, it's just that my home state comes up VERY RARELY anywhere, I get excited.

*smiles* i thought it was really interesting. 1) I LOVE LOVE LOVE the use of species (so much better than the tiring use of fox or wolf in every single story furs seem to write) so it was very exciting to see a raccoon and a feline ^_^ 2) The originality of the story: The lynx wasn't just walked or driving past but there is a whole secret side of the story we don't know and are left to guess at which makes the story very entertaining because you have this nice story about a 'coon freezing and yet your mind still whirls about this fancy ship 3) it was a happy story, it felt so nice to read something where the 'coon didn't have to 'do' something for his passage to San Fran or didn't get abused, beat up, taken advantage of under the bridge.

Overall, i give you high ratings ^.^

Sweet! It felt like a movie and conveyed a lot of great imagery in a short space. (I really have to think of a new word to replace 'imagery', I use it too much, but in this case it's justified.)

Quite interesting. Surprising. The whole stealth air-craft thingy dawned to me as something a bit sci-fi, but all in all the story is quite enjoyable and entertaining. You catch the raccoon quite well, I think, even if the story is quite short, you manage to describe his personality. Same goes for the lynx as well. Great little piece, I enjoyed reading this.