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One of today's songs, and probably the last of these 'preview' acoustic-watchamaycallits for now. It's also the one that I think needs the most work.. you can already see how cluttered it is on just the acoustics. Not happy with the lead guitar improv I went with here, and the melodies definitely need some work to get them to align well. Still - I like the vibe of it, and I hope it'll work out well enough to use in the end. : )
Who in their right mind listens to the one they know is right
When the truth is not what they want it to be
Listen to me
I am not the one that wanted to be right
But these prophecies they were not built to last
I will lift my mood and call it revery
And I will speak well of you for as long as I will be
Now you read me
Who in their right mind listens to the one they know is right
When the truth is not what they want it to be
Listen to me
I am not the one that wanted to be right
But these prophecies they were not built to last
I will lift my mood and call it revery
And I will speak well of you for as long as I will be
Now you read me
Category Music / Rock
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File Size 2.35 MB
Thanks for your input - the problem with the vocals, I expect, lie with the way the melodies are cued. They're out of sync and simply put not quite there yet. This recording is the third time I played the song, and the first acoustic, so it's not quite at the stage yet where it just rolls out smoothly.
The backing vocals are actually more on the mark timing wise, I hope it'll work out in the end without having to smith around the lyrics. : )
The backing vocals are actually more on the mark timing wise, I hope it'll work out in the end without having to smith around the lyrics. : )
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