
My Halloween story for the year which was a collaboration with an artist named
Faudka who made the picture I use as my icon for it.
He's a really great guy, and you should see the drawing he made at it's full size here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18115524/
This story could technically be called a sequel to my previous Scooby Doo story (As Scooby is an already super fat dog from the start here, as a result of what happen in that other story.) So if you want to know how he became so incredibly obese before these events I recommend you to read my older story first: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11738136/
Finally Scooby Doo and all the others are all copyrighted characters. (Except for the character Jerry that I made, and the ghost that Faudka came up the design with.)
Scooby Doo eats the mystery.
After the events at the V.D. corporation (Which left a certain canine friend at a very overweight and permanent state) Scooby and the gang was on the roads again to solve mysteries, even thought they had to do some changes to adapt better to Scooby's weight first. (Making the mystery machine able to hold the over one ton dog in the backseat for example.)
The first case that they had got was a pretty simple one. Some lonely person living in a big haunted house had said that he had seen a ghost haunting it. Pretty standard stuff for them. "Are you sure there isn't some kind of twist to this thing? Like if the ghost looks like a walking beetle-man, or can turn people into stone by staring at them?" Velma asked, almost feeling a bit sad over the fact that it seemed to just be an "ordinary" ghost this time. "Nope. Just the classic transparent, chain shaking, sheet-wearing ghost. At least that's what the guy calling for us made it sound like on the phone." Freddy said. "Doesn't matter if it's a regular or a new ghost, we still don't want to have to deal with it." Shaggy said, shaking with fear together with Scooby, almost making the whole mystery machine fall off the road by the vibrations of his huge body. "Take it easy you two. You both know that it is always just somebody in a costume in the end." Daphne said to clam Shaggy and Scooby Doo.
As they finally reached out to the spooked place in question they could clearly see that the place looked pretty up to part with the haunted part. It was built on top of a big hill that could be seen from a small village that was laying at the foot of the hill. It looked much older and untouched by time compared to the rest of the houses they saw as they drove towards it. There was even a constant spread of dark clouds hanging over the place. (And sometimes the rest of the village.)
As they meet the new owner of the house that had also called them. His name was Jerry and first thing noticing about him was that he was big, and I mean really big. He stood about 6 foot tall and had a weight on around 500 pounds. He was a guy that usually most likes to sit in front of the TV to watch wrestling and football, and eat junk food all day. The one reason to why he had gotten this place in the first place was because of how amazingly cheep it was.
"So you are those Mystery rascals I called for?" He asked like if they where suppose to repair his TV instead of catching a ghost. "We are The Mystery Gang, and we fix every kind of problem no matter the size of the ghost or monster." Fred said, trying to sound like a true professional. "But please, let not the monster be to big." Shaggy said from behind Freddy. "reah, rlease" Scooby said to, making the very fat man first now noticing him. "Woah! Check out the size of your dog!" He said, taking a few steps back to really take in the sight of what he saw. "He looks just like my friend Joe Capsul, or "Fat Joe" as we like to call him." "Can their even be someone YOU would call fat?" Everyone in the gang thought to themselves. "If he somehow got transformed into a dog I'll bet yah that this is exactly how he would look like." Jerry said, now finding the whole thing much more hilarious.
"So you're saying that this place is haunted by a ghost?" Velma asked, wanting to go back to their original subject. "Oh yes. Ever since I bought this place there has been things going around here, that makes me feel a bit uncomfortable living here." Jerry said. "Things?" Freddy asked. "Yes, you know. Lights going on and off, doors suddenly slamming, and spooky noises." Jerry said pretty calmly. "Like. If that was me, I would have moved out as quickly as possible!" Shaggy said, both he and Scooby wanting to leave. "And none of this did even scare you?" Daphne asked surprised. "I just thought it was some neighbourhood kids pulling pranks on me, but it was then something truly horrible happened!" Jerry said, looking scared for real now.
"What was it?" Fred asked curiously. "Just before I went to bed last night I saw a strange light coming from the kitchen and when I went over to see what it was, what do you kids think I would find?" "A ghost? No, a phantom! No, wait...a zombie, defiantly a zombie." Fred said after debating wit himself for a moment. "How would a zombie even glow in the first place?" Velma asked, wondering over how Freddy's logic works at some moments. But before Freddy could give an answer Jerry said "No, it was the light to my refrigerator!"
"Really?" Velma asked sarcastically, but it was obvious that it went completely over Jerry's head. "Yes. Can you imagine what would have happen if it would have stayed open all night? All the food I have prepared for the super bowl finals, burgers, pizzas, colas, all of that would be ruined!" Jerry said, sounding more worried and scared then he had ever before. "Like, that would have been a huge disaster!" Shaggy said, with Scooby agreeing. "Listen. I don't think this sounds like a real case, but more like someone pulling pranks on you, and you yourself that probably forgot to close the refrigerator." Fred told Jerry, and was about to together with Daphne and Velma leave when Shaggy and Scooby suddenly blocked their pass. "No! We can't leave!" Shaggy said. "Listen Shaggy and Scooby, it's pretty obvious that the only thing supernatural here is inside this guy's head." Velma said, and was about to continue ranting when Shaggy and Scooby gave their best pleading looks to their friends. (And with Scooby he was literally giving them the biggest puppy dog eyes they had ever seen.)
"Fine." Fred, Daphne and Velma said together. "We can go and take a look around to see if there is anything haunting the house, and if we don't find anything we're leaving. Does that sound fair?" Fred asked Shaggy and Scooby, who both nodded in response. "Okay then." Fred said before turning back to Jerry. "We can take a look around the house to see if there is anything haunting it." He told Jerry that very happily answered, "Great! That would mean that I can go away and get some drinks to have to the game and probably be back when you have gone through the whole building."
Jerry then grabbed his wallet and leaved the house. "Happy hunting!" He shouted as he took his truck and drove off. "Let's start searching the place then." Freddy said, and was about to the annual "splitting up the gang" that usually involved himself and the girls in one team, and Shaggy and Scooby in the other. But this time when he was about to say it Scooby walked up to him and said, "Uhm, rfred?" "Yes Scooby?" Fred asked. "I rwould rlike to go on my rown rthis rtime." the fat dog said. Everyone looked very surprised on Scooby's sudden sign on courage, but who where they to talk against him. "Sure, if you really wants to we four can be one group and you can be on your own Scooby." Freddy said, and let Scooby walk away down the hallway on his own, while the others went up to the second floor. "I wonder if Scooby will be okay being all by himself?" Shaggy asked, feeling worried about his close friend. "Don't worry Shaggy. You know that even if he runs into something, it always turns out to just be somebody in a costume." Daphne said to calm Shaggy down.
But what nobody could have guessed was that the ghost in question this time actually was real!
The ghost in question was once a man living at the place hundreds of years ago (1815 to be more exact) simply called Dracul, a name he had gotten from the rest of the villages living there because of his obsession of studying and performing different kinds of vampire acts. The whole thing about vampires fascinated him in a big way, especially in their said ability to become immortal and never die. But since it didn't exist any real vampires for him to learn from Dracul had instead been making a lot of chemical mixtures in the process of making an elixir that could give him the powers of a true vampire.
His obsession about finding the right formula lead to him less and less getting into town to by food and other stuff, and finally there was a time when he hadn't been leaving his home for weeks. The villages all wondered what had become of him, and could only see two solutions to it. Either he was dead, or he had actually succeeded in becoming a vampire. Not wanting to risk seeing if it was the later some brave men decided to go to his house and see what had happen to him. Once there they first spied from far away to see a big humanlike figure move pass the windows. They could have just gone back and tell the rest that Dracul was still alive, but something made them want to go closer. Something didn't look right with him. So they got closer and got to a window on the first floor when they heard sounds of him entering the room. They hide down and wait until they heard him humming a small tune to himself. Knowing he was to busy being in his own world one of them looked up to see Dracul facing his back to them and looking at himself in a mirror. The man gave the others a silent signal to look with him. From what they saw nothing seemed more stranger then usual with the guy. He was surprisingly well dressed for ones, sporting an elegant suit with cape and everything. He did look a bit thinner then last time, "but living without any new food for so long must do that to his body" they thought. But that's when one of the men noticed something that mad him froze for a second. Dracul didn't have any reflection in the mirror! Getting out from his frozen state the man yelled instead, which got the other men scared to because he had been giving away their position, and for getting Dracul's attention.
Turning around to face his spying audience the men now saw just what kind of changes had happen to Dracul. The no reflection in the mirror was a pretty big sign on it's own, but Dracul the rest of Dracul's face and body was also proof of what he had been doing. His previously pretty ordinary human face was completely changed. His eyes where now much more narrowly shaped, and was glowing red. His ears had grown out and had become more "pointy", and almost looked like a couple of devil's horn when pointing at a certain angle. But the biggest changed had to be around his nose and mouth that had now been stretched out to a long snout with two huge front teeth's sticking out. It had been changed to look much more like the head of a bat then the head of a person. His hands had also changed in how they where now sporting long sharp claws, and looked unnaturally pale and dead like. This was a pretty huge contrast to his head that looked to be much more darker then the rest of his body. (But that could be from the dark fur that had grown all over it.)
Completely taken over by fear of what they saw the men took and made a run for it back to the village. Once there they told everyone about how Dracul finally had managed to become "one of those bloodsuckers!", and that it was up to them if they didn't want to end up the same. So they all made a big mob that stormed towards Darcul's home. Once there they dragged him out of his house, and then forced him into a coffin that they nailed 20 big nails into and then buried next to the house, and they hoped that it would make sure that the vampire danger that he was would never return.
And in one way he didn't. The lack of air and food soon took away his life, and his physical body died. But that wasn't the end of him. As the men that had seen him ran away to tell the others, Dracul had made a quick "extra elixir" to himself. Drinking that was thought to help unlock the ability for him to live after his death and return as a ghost. So when the villages came to take him, he just let them have their way since he was prepared. Laying in his coffin buried six feet down Dracul simply closed his eyes, and let the whole process have it's way. As he took his last breath he could feel himself leave his body, and raise from the dead.
One thing that he hadn't planned on was the fact that once he was a ghost, he couldn't go outside the borders of his home. (It might have to do something about him having to be close to his body or something.) But instead of being angry about it he just accepted it and stayed true to his home, never to let anyone come close to it.
At first the people in the village told visitors to stay away from the mansion because of the said ghost guarding it, but as time went on and the legend faded away Dracul still guarded what used to be his old home. Every time somebody tried to move in there he would have make sure that they didn't stay there for long. There had even been times when the place where suppose to be torn down by construction machines, but he had used his magical powers to make them suddenly "stop working" when they got close to the house.
For over two hundred years he had been scaring just about everyone away, and this fat man called Jerry wouldn't be any exception. In fact he was really enjoying tormenting the fat man. Having been very skinny even when he was alive Dracul had never really liked the though of having extra fat hanging on his body, and he also disgusted highly any overweight people he saw.
And now here was these kids trying to "get rid of him" as they said to Jerry, and they had THE BIGGEST, MOST RIDICULOUSLY OVERWEIGHT DOG HE HAD EVER SEEN! He never thought it would even be possible for any man to be this fat, even less a dog. Seeing the dog walk away from the kids felt like to good of an opportunity for him to not have some fun with him before scaring him. To see that dogs fatty flab's shake as he would run out of the house would be such a wonderful sight for Dracul, he could hardly contain himself.
While the gang thought that Scooby had decided to go on his own because of his bravery, Scooby had his own reason for it. When Jerry had told the gang about all the food stocked into his refrigerator Scooby saw his chance to have a real meal. Given his size it was pretty hard for his friends to find places that could feed Scooby until he was feeling done, with most food stops saying that they "would have to close down if they feed their dog anything more". Even though it would be considering steal a man food Scooby didn't care, "Ryou rcan rjust rblame rthe rghost." was Scooby's excuse.
After some twist and turns Scooby finally managed to find the kitchen and the dinning room area, with Dracul following his every step. The kitchen looked just about the same as it had done since the house was built, except for a pretty new and big refrigerator that looked very out of place next to the otherwise old decor. Opening the door to it Scooby almost passed out by what he saw. Inside was like Jerry had said Hamburgers, Pizzas and bottles filling up every single square of the big metal box. What was even better was the fact that all of these treats where already prepared before hand, meaning that Scooby could literally just take them out and eat them as they are.
He could have just stand there by the refrigerator and had his meal, but knowing that there was a big dinning table with fancy chairs in the next room seemed to good of a dinning experience to pass up. So for a few minutes the bulked up canine took and moved pretty much all of the eatable contests out of the cool box and placed it on the 20 foot long table. Once it was all moved over Scooby sat down on two of the dinning chairs, (That surprisingly managed to hold up his super wide and super heavy butt.) and started to dig in.
Even though he looked like he should be very slow when doing anything Scooby Doo actually could do most stuff at the same speed as anyone with a thin body, or even faster. And that couldn't be more true then when he started eating. Given his new size it was pretty rare that there would be moments when he could call something he ate "A real meal." for him, but this here was one of those moments, so it was pretty understandable when he stated to enter his "Eating state". It was almost like he put his mind into autopilot and just let himself go as he pleased, as if his whole purpose of living only was devoted to devouring the food and everything else became unimportant.
One of those things getting unimportant for Scooby was Dracul, that was just looking in disbelief over the sight. That there could be so much greed and gluttony at one place at once was pretty impressive. "That dog is already two of the seven deadly sins in one." Dracul thought as he slide right up next to Scooby's face, the fat dog not even noticing the ghost floating next to him.
Waving one of his ghostly arms in front of Scooby's face gave (As he was expecting) no results. Scooby was still just eating Burger after Pizza after Cola bottle like nothing else but him and the food was there. Dracul just took a moment to really see just how amazingly filthy the dog was as he ate. He had bits of crumps and big spots of ketchup covering his constantly swollen cheeks, despite him actually swallowing many of the food he ate whole.
His plan was to do typical ghostly stuff like making scary sounds with chains and make messages appear on the walls, but given that the dog was in such a food trance none of that would probably have any effect. So trying to be creative Dracul finally came up with something that would guarantied get the dog's attention. Taking one Hamburger from the far away end of the table Dracul gave it some red eyes, some sharp teeth's, and a green glowing mist around it. And with that he had created a "ghost burger". "Seeing this float in front of his fat face should probably make the lard beast lose a few pounds by pure fright." Dracul thought, as he let the hamburger fly free and towards Scooby. As the hamburger got really close up to Scooby's face it started stare dramatically, show it's teeth's and pretty much do everything to make it look scary. This got Scooby's attention and he even stop eating for a second to take in this strange thing right next to him. Dracul was expecting the dog to flee for his life at that moment, but what Scooby did next was (At least for him) completely unexpected.
In just a matter of seconds Scooby grabbed the hamburger ghost, shoved it into his mouth, swallowed it whole and then just continued eating like nothing had happen. (The hamburger ghost even looked a bit terrified when it realized what was about to happen to it before it got eaten.)
Dracul's face went from super confidence to completely dumbfounded when he saw what just happen. This dog just grabbed and ate this ghostly creature without thinking just because it looked like food. This was beyond any kind of food obsession that he had ever seen, and what was worse he didn't even know what else to do to try and scare the dog. Then suddenly something happen that startled Scooby a bit! Sadly it wasn't anything involving Dracul. What had happen was that Scooby had become so heavy that he finally made the two chairs he was sitting on break under his weight, but he was so fat on his behind that sitting on the ground still kept him on the same level of the table as before. And shortly after checking that he hadn't got any splinters on his butt Scooby once again continued with his meal.
Dracul felt that it was all hopeless and that he would never be able to do anything that would actually scare that dog. That's when he started to notice that the dog had been looking at his huge belly a lot. For every Hamburger and/or Pizza he ate he would then for a short moment look down and feel his stomach as food was getting swallowed down into it, as if to see and feel how it was growing with every bit of food he ate. That gave Dracul a new idea.
"Since he likes looking at his stomach so much I think he wouldn't expect if something would pop out of it!" Dracul thought and smiled by his own plan. Not only would it scare the dog for sure, but he would probably never dare to eat anything ever again!
His plan was simple. He would first fly into the middle of the dogs stomach. Then he would adjust himself to the right angle. And then he would make his appearance out of the stomach, just as the canine would be sitting there admiring it.
Deciding to put the plan into motion Dracul took and started making his way into the dog from the side fat. (Making Scooby shiver a little by the cold feeling of the ghost entering his body.) Already there something didn't seem to feel right as he did it. Going through the obese dogs body felt hard, and he had been going through some hard things in the past. Stuff like wooden walls, stone floors, and even the six feet of thick earth that he had been buried under was all things that he could go through without any problems because he was a ghost. But the wobbling, multilayered fat of this humongous pet dog actually gave him some resistance. It made him fell...tired?
Still he didn't think much of it and made his way to the absolute middle of it all. The stomach sack. Once inside he could see just how large even it was. Given that a stomach sack usually is just about a few inches wide, Scooby's had instead been growing to be the several feet in diameter! "No wonder it is able to contain so much food for the dog to store." Dracul thought as he looked around. It was already halfway filled with the junk food that he was currently eating, and even though some of it was getting digested there was still entering more food then what was getting taken care of. Even though it was a bit cramped for the moment, there where still some room for Dracul to move around in.
Feeling that he has seen enough of how things works inside animal bodies Dracul decided to continue his plan to scare the dog, and was making his way to go through the "roof" of the stomach room when he noticed he couldn't! Trying again to push himself through the stomach walls still gave him the same result. He had had some trouble getting in there, but now he couldn't even get out?! "This doesn't make any sense!" Dracul thought, as he tried to make his powers work. As a ghost there shouldn't be anything that could stop him from phasing through anything, and now he couldn't leave this place. "What is going to happen to me now? Am I suppose to live here for all eternity?" Dracul asked himself annoyingly, but the real answer to that question would be much, much worse.
All of the sudden Dracul felt a strange feeling spread across his body. Something that felt a bit "itchy" and it only got bigger and harder for every second. It was something that the ghost hadn't experienced in a long time.
Pain.
He was feeling pain, but why? What was it about this situation that could lead to him feeling pain?...Then it suddenly hit him like a pile of brick landing on his head. He was getting digested by the dog! He didn't know how it was possible, but somehow he was not able to go through the dog's stomach walls, and the dog's stomach juices was able to hurt his ghostly skin.
This was all starting to look more and more like the ghost's worst kind of nightmare come true. The one thing he thought he was going to be able to do once he became undead was to just not die again. He thought that once he left the his living life he was going to be able to live forever in the after life. But now here he was. Inside a of slobbering, greasy, huge pig of a dog's insanely large stomach, and getting digested like he was a part of it's meal.
The thought of that this was how it would all possibly end for him made him try even harder getting out, with him punching the walls surrounding him, and even shouting out "HELP!" as loud as he could. He didn't care that he was giving away to the dog that he was there, he just wanted to live. But sadly Scooby had been totally unaware of Dracul's present all the time, and giving the thickness of his stomach's walls he wasn't even able to hear or feel the ghost's desperate attempts of reaching him. The only thing he felt was once the ghost had entered his stomach (And somehow made his ghostly body "whole" instead of transparent.) it felt like he suddenly has had three extra burgers and two extra pizzas stuffed into him. (Not that he was complaining over that of course.)
As the damage the juices gave only got worse, and as the room was getting more and more filled with food Dracul realized that he wasn't going to make it. He was going to become digested. And as he could feel himself starting to lose his conscious and entering a second deep sleep he thought about how he literally had ended up here by doing the dog's job for him. The dog hadn't even known he existed, and he had forced himself into the dogs stomach by his own force. "In hindsight this didn't seem like the most smartest plan I could have made to scare that dog." Dracul though before closing his eyes for the last time.
As Dracul was getting digested Scooby continued eating like it was nothing. Except for him having less space in his stomach to store food nothing was slowing down his pace. After half an hour of constant eating Scooby finally was done with the whole thing, and it shows. Not only on his even more then usual bloated stomach, but also in the big mess of wrap hamburger papers and empty pizza boxes and soda cans covering the dinning table and floor. Feeling like he didn't want to be back once Jerry came home Scooby Doo quickly got on his feet, (Having to first find ground for his legs to touch.) before waddling back towards the entrance to meet his friends.
As he came back to the staircase next to the main entrance he saw the rest of the gang conveniently making their way down there at the same time. Looking at their dog friend they could easily guess what he had done. Even with his new bulky figure they could still see that he had packed on some pounds since last time they saw him. (Mostly by that his big round stomach usually stay above ground thanks to the new length of his legs, but now it was brushing the floor as he walked.)
"Well I couldn't find any clues showing that there would be anything supernatural in this house." Velma said.
"And I never saw any spying neighbours, business men wanting to buy the land the place is standing on, or any other usual suspects that turns out to be the once doing it." Fred added.
"Scooby at least looks like he managed to find where the kitchen was." Shaggy said, sounding a bit jealous of his dog friend for getting all the food this time.
"Speaking of which, did you find anything ghostly on your solo trip Scooby?" Daphne asked.
Scooby was about to answer when he felt a burp coming up. Giving said burp let out a bit of a ghostly ectoplasm, (That only was visible for a small second before disappearing quickly.) and Scooby afterwards blushing a little and saying "Rnope, rnothing at rall."
Scooby-Dooby-Doo!

He's a really great guy, and you should see the drawing he made at it's full size here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18115524/
This story could technically be called a sequel to my previous Scooby Doo story (As Scooby is an already super fat dog from the start here, as a result of what happen in that other story.) So if you want to know how he became so incredibly obese before these events I recommend you to read my older story first: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11738136/
Finally Scooby Doo and all the others are all copyrighted characters. (Except for the character Jerry that I made, and the ghost that Faudka came up the design with.)
Scooby Doo eats the mystery.
After the events at the V.D. corporation (Which left a certain canine friend at a very overweight and permanent state) Scooby and the gang was on the roads again to solve mysteries, even thought they had to do some changes to adapt better to Scooby's weight first. (Making the mystery machine able to hold the over one ton dog in the backseat for example.)
The first case that they had got was a pretty simple one. Some lonely person living in a big haunted house had said that he had seen a ghost haunting it. Pretty standard stuff for them. "Are you sure there isn't some kind of twist to this thing? Like if the ghost looks like a walking beetle-man, or can turn people into stone by staring at them?" Velma asked, almost feeling a bit sad over the fact that it seemed to just be an "ordinary" ghost this time. "Nope. Just the classic transparent, chain shaking, sheet-wearing ghost. At least that's what the guy calling for us made it sound like on the phone." Freddy said. "Doesn't matter if it's a regular or a new ghost, we still don't want to have to deal with it." Shaggy said, shaking with fear together with Scooby, almost making the whole mystery machine fall off the road by the vibrations of his huge body. "Take it easy you two. You both know that it is always just somebody in a costume in the end." Daphne said to clam Shaggy and Scooby Doo.
As they finally reached out to the spooked place in question they could clearly see that the place looked pretty up to part with the haunted part. It was built on top of a big hill that could be seen from a small village that was laying at the foot of the hill. It looked much older and untouched by time compared to the rest of the houses they saw as they drove towards it. There was even a constant spread of dark clouds hanging over the place. (And sometimes the rest of the village.)
As they meet the new owner of the house that had also called them. His name was Jerry and first thing noticing about him was that he was big, and I mean really big. He stood about 6 foot tall and had a weight on around 500 pounds. He was a guy that usually most likes to sit in front of the TV to watch wrestling and football, and eat junk food all day. The one reason to why he had gotten this place in the first place was because of how amazingly cheep it was.
"So you are those Mystery rascals I called for?" He asked like if they where suppose to repair his TV instead of catching a ghost. "We are The Mystery Gang, and we fix every kind of problem no matter the size of the ghost or monster." Fred said, trying to sound like a true professional. "But please, let not the monster be to big." Shaggy said from behind Freddy. "reah, rlease" Scooby said to, making the very fat man first now noticing him. "Woah! Check out the size of your dog!" He said, taking a few steps back to really take in the sight of what he saw. "He looks just like my friend Joe Capsul, or "Fat Joe" as we like to call him." "Can their even be someone YOU would call fat?" Everyone in the gang thought to themselves. "If he somehow got transformed into a dog I'll bet yah that this is exactly how he would look like." Jerry said, now finding the whole thing much more hilarious.
"So you're saying that this place is haunted by a ghost?" Velma asked, wanting to go back to their original subject. "Oh yes. Ever since I bought this place there has been things going around here, that makes me feel a bit uncomfortable living here." Jerry said. "Things?" Freddy asked. "Yes, you know. Lights going on and off, doors suddenly slamming, and spooky noises." Jerry said pretty calmly. "Like. If that was me, I would have moved out as quickly as possible!" Shaggy said, both he and Scooby wanting to leave. "And none of this did even scare you?" Daphne asked surprised. "I just thought it was some neighbourhood kids pulling pranks on me, but it was then something truly horrible happened!" Jerry said, looking scared for real now.
"What was it?" Fred asked curiously. "Just before I went to bed last night I saw a strange light coming from the kitchen and when I went over to see what it was, what do you kids think I would find?" "A ghost? No, a phantom! No, wait...a zombie, defiantly a zombie." Fred said after debating wit himself for a moment. "How would a zombie even glow in the first place?" Velma asked, wondering over how Freddy's logic works at some moments. But before Freddy could give an answer Jerry said "No, it was the light to my refrigerator!"
"Really?" Velma asked sarcastically, but it was obvious that it went completely over Jerry's head. "Yes. Can you imagine what would have happen if it would have stayed open all night? All the food I have prepared for the super bowl finals, burgers, pizzas, colas, all of that would be ruined!" Jerry said, sounding more worried and scared then he had ever before. "Like, that would have been a huge disaster!" Shaggy said, with Scooby agreeing. "Listen. I don't think this sounds like a real case, but more like someone pulling pranks on you, and you yourself that probably forgot to close the refrigerator." Fred told Jerry, and was about to together with Daphne and Velma leave when Shaggy and Scooby suddenly blocked their pass. "No! We can't leave!" Shaggy said. "Listen Shaggy and Scooby, it's pretty obvious that the only thing supernatural here is inside this guy's head." Velma said, and was about to continue ranting when Shaggy and Scooby gave their best pleading looks to their friends. (And with Scooby he was literally giving them the biggest puppy dog eyes they had ever seen.)
"Fine." Fred, Daphne and Velma said together. "We can go and take a look around to see if there is anything haunting the house, and if we don't find anything we're leaving. Does that sound fair?" Fred asked Shaggy and Scooby, who both nodded in response. "Okay then." Fred said before turning back to Jerry. "We can take a look around the house to see if there is anything haunting it." He told Jerry that very happily answered, "Great! That would mean that I can go away and get some drinks to have to the game and probably be back when you have gone through the whole building."
Jerry then grabbed his wallet and leaved the house. "Happy hunting!" He shouted as he took his truck and drove off. "Let's start searching the place then." Freddy said, and was about to the annual "splitting up the gang" that usually involved himself and the girls in one team, and Shaggy and Scooby in the other. But this time when he was about to say it Scooby walked up to him and said, "Uhm, rfred?" "Yes Scooby?" Fred asked. "I rwould rlike to go on my rown rthis rtime." the fat dog said. Everyone looked very surprised on Scooby's sudden sign on courage, but who where they to talk against him. "Sure, if you really wants to we four can be one group and you can be on your own Scooby." Freddy said, and let Scooby walk away down the hallway on his own, while the others went up to the second floor. "I wonder if Scooby will be okay being all by himself?" Shaggy asked, feeling worried about his close friend. "Don't worry Shaggy. You know that even if he runs into something, it always turns out to just be somebody in a costume." Daphne said to calm Shaggy down.
But what nobody could have guessed was that the ghost in question this time actually was real!
The ghost in question was once a man living at the place hundreds of years ago (1815 to be more exact) simply called Dracul, a name he had gotten from the rest of the villages living there because of his obsession of studying and performing different kinds of vampire acts. The whole thing about vampires fascinated him in a big way, especially in their said ability to become immortal and never die. But since it didn't exist any real vampires for him to learn from Dracul had instead been making a lot of chemical mixtures in the process of making an elixir that could give him the powers of a true vampire.
His obsession about finding the right formula lead to him less and less getting into town to by food and other stuff, and finally there was a time when he hadn't been leaving his home for weeks. The villages all wondered what had become of him, and could only see two solutions to it. Either he was dead, or he had actually succeeded in becoming a vampire. Not wanting to risk seeing if it was the later some brave men decided to go to his house and see what had happen to him. Once there they first spied from far away to see a big humanlike figure move pass the windows. They could have just gone back and tell the rest that Dracul was still alive, but something made them want to go closer. Something didn't look right with him. So they got closer and got to a window on the first floor when they heard sounds of him entering the room. They hide down and wait until they heard him humming a small tune to himself. Knowing he was to busy being in his own world one of them looked up to see Dracul facing his back to them and looking at himself in a mirror. The man gave the others a silent signal to look with him. From what they saw nothing seemed more stranger then usual with the guy. He was surprisingly well dressed for ones, sporting an elegant suit with cape and everything. He did look a bit thinner then last time, "but living without any new food for so long must do that to his body" they thought. But that's when one of the men noticed something that mad him froze for a second. Dracul didn't have any reflection in the mirror! Getting out from his frozen state the man yelled instead, which got the other men scared to because he had been giving away their position, and for getting Dracul's attention.
Turning around to face his spying audience the men now saw just what kind of changes had happen to Dracul. The no reflection in the mirror was a pretty big sign on it's own, but Dracul the rest of Dracul's face and body was also proof of what he had been doing. His previously pretty ordinary human face was completely changed. His eyes where now much more narrowly shaped, and was glowing red. His ears had grown out and had become more "pointy", and almost looked like a couple of devil's horn when pointing at a certain angle. But the biggest changed had to be around his nose and mouth that had now been stretched out to a long snout with two huge front teeth's sticking out. It had been changed to look much more like the head of a bat then the head of a person. His hands had also changed in how they where now sporting long sharp claws, and looked unnaturally pale and dead like. This was a pretty huge contrast to his head that looked to be much more darker then the rest of his body. (But that could be from the dark fur that had grown all over it.)
Completely taken over by fear of what they saw the men took and made a run for it back to the village. Once there they told everyone about how Dracul finally had managed to become "one of those bloodsuckers!", and that it was up to them if they didn't want to end up the same. So they all made a big mob that stormed towards Darcul's home. Once there they dragged him out of his house, and then forced him into a coffin that they nailed 20 big nails into and then buried next to the house, and they hoped that it would make sure that the vampire danger that he was would never return.
And in one way he didn't. The lack of air and food soon took away his life, and his physical body died. But that wasn't the end of him. As the men that had seen him ran away to tell the others, Dracul had made a quick "extra elixir" to himself. Drinking that was thought to help unlock the ability for him to live after his death and return as a ghost. So when the villages came to take him, he just let them have their way since he was prepared. Laying in his coffin buried six feet down Dracul simply closed his eyes, and let the whole process have it's way. As he took his last breath he could feel himself leave his body, and raise from the dead.
One thing that he hadn't planned on was the fact that once he was a ghost, he couldn't go outside the borders of his home. (It might have to do something about him having to be close to his body or something.) But instead of being angry about it he just accepted it and stayed true to his home, never to let anyone come close to it.
At first the people in the village told visitors to stay away from the mansion because of the said ghost guarding it, but as time went on and the legend faded away Dracul still guarded what used to be his old home. Every time somebody tried to move in there he would have make sure that they didn't stay there for long. There had even been times when the place where suppose to be torn down by construction machines, but he had used his magical powers to make them suddenly "stop working" when they got close to the house.
For over two hundred years he had been scaring just about everyone away, and this fat man called Jerry wouldn't be any exception. In fact he was really enjoying tormenting the fat man. Having been very skinny even when he was alive Dracul had never really liked the though of having extra fat hanging on his body, and he also disgusted highly any overweight people he saw.
And now here was these kids trying to "get rid of him" as they said to Jerry, and they had THE BIGGEST, MOST RIDICULOUSLY OVERWEIGHT DOG HE HAD EVER SEEN! He never thought it would even be possible for any man to be this fat, even less a dog. Seeing the dog walk away from the kids felt like to good of an opportunity for him to not have some fun with him before scaring him. To see that dogs fatty flab's shake as he would run out of the house would be such a wonderful sight for Dracul, he could hardly contain himself.
While the gang thought that Scooby had decided to go on his own because of his bravery, Scooby had his own reason for it. When Jerry had told the gang about all the food stocked into his refrigerator Scooby saw his chance to have a real meal. Given his size it was pretty hard for his friends to find places that could feed Scooby until he was feeling done, with most food stops saying that they "would have to close down if they feed their dog anything more". Even though it would be considering steal a man food Scooby didn't care, "Ryou rcan rjust rblame rthe rghost." was Scooby's excuse.
After some twist and turns Scooby finally managed to find the kitchen and the dinning room area, with Dracul following his every step. The kitchen looked just about the same as it had done since the house was built, except for a pretty new and big refrigerator that looked very out of place next to the otherwise old decor. Opening the door to it Scooby almost passed out by what he saw. Inside was like Jerry had said Hamburgers, Pizzas and bottles filling up every single square of the big metal box. What was even better was the fact that all of these treats where already prepared before hand, meaning that Scooby could literally just take them out and eat them as they are.
He could have just stand there by the refrigerator and had his meal, but knowing that there was a big dinning table with fancy chairs in the next room seemed to good of a dinning experience to pass up. So for a few minutes the bulked up canine took and moved pretty much all of the eatable contests out of the cool box and placed it on the 20 foot long table. Once it was all moved over Scooby sat down on two of the dinning chairs, (That surprisingly managed to hold up his super wide and super heavy butt.) and started to dig in.
Even though he looked like he should be very slow when doing anything Scooby Doo actually could do most stuff at the same speed as anyone with a thin body, or even faster. And that couldn't be more true then when he started eating. Given his new size it was pretty rare that there would be moments when he could call something he ate "A real meal." for him, but this here was one of those moments, so it was pretty understandable when he stated to enter his "Eating state". It was almost like he put his mind into autopilot and just let himself go as he pleased, as if his whole purpose of living only was devoted to devouring the food and everything else became unimportant.
One of those things getting unimportant for Scooby was Dracul, that was just looking in disbelief over the sight. That there could be so much greed and gluttony at one place at once was pretty impressive. "That dog is already two of the seven deadly sins in one." Dracul thought as he slide right up next to Scooby's face, the fat dog not even noticing the ghost floating next to him.
Waving one of his ghostly arms in front of Scooby's face gave (As he was expecting) no results. Scooby was still just eating Burger after Pizza after Cola bottle like nothing else but him and the food was there. Dracul just took a moment to really see just how amazingly filthy the dog was as he ate. He had bits of crumps and big spots of ketchup covering his constantly swollen cheeks, despite him actually swallowing many of the food he ate whole.
His plan was to do typical ghostly stuff like making scary sounds with chains and make messages appear on the walls, but given that the dog was in such a food trance none of that would probably have any effect. So trying to be creative Dracul finally came up with something that would guarantied get the dog's attention. Taking one Hamburger from the far away end of the table Dracul gave it some red eyes, some sharp teeth's, and a green glowing mist around it. And with that he had created a "ghost burger". "Seeing this float in front of his fat face should probably make the lard beast lose a few pounds by pure fright." Dracul thought, as he let the hamburger fly free and towards Scooby. As the hamburger got really close up to Scooby's face it started stare dramatically, show it's teeth's and pretty much do everything to make it look scary. This got Scooby's attention and he even stop eating for a second to take in this strange thing right next to him. Dracul was expecting the dog to flee for his life at that moment, but what Scooby did next was (At least for him) completely unexpected.
In just a matter of seconds Scooby grabbed the hamburger ghost, shoved it into his mouth, swallowed it whole and then just continued eating like nothing had happen. (The hamburger ghost even looked a bit terrified when it realized what was about to happen to it before it got eaten.)
Dracul's face went from super confidence to completely dumbfounded when he saw what just happen. This dog just grabbed and ate this ghostly creature without thinking just because it looked like food. This was beyond any kind of food obsession that he had ever seen, and what was worse he didn't even know what else to do to try and scare the dog. Then suddenly something happen that startled Scooby a bit! Sadly it wasn't anything involving Dracul. What had happen was that Scooby had become so heavy that he finally made the two chairs he was sitting on break under his weight, but he was so fat on his behind that sitting on the ground still kept him on the same level of the table as before. And shortly after checking that he hadn't got any splinters on his butt Scooby once again continued with his meal.
Dracul felt that it was all hopeless and that he would never be able to do anything that would actually scare that dog. That's when he started to notice that the dog had been looking at his huge belly a lot. For every Hamburger and/or Pizza he ate he would then for a short moment look down and feel his stomach as food was getting swallowed down into it, as if to see and feel how it was growing with every bit of food he ate. That gave Dracul a new idea.
"Since he likes looking at his stomach so much I think he wouldn't expect if something would pop out of it!" Dracul thought and smiled by his own plan. Not only would it scare the dog for sure, but he would probably never dare to eat anything ever again!
His plan was simple. He would first fly into the middle of the dogs stomach. Then he would adjust himself to the right angle. And then he would make his appearance out of the stomach, just as the canine would be sitting there admiring it.
Deciding to put the plan into motion Dracul took and started making his way into the dog from the side fat. (Making Scooby shiver a little by the cold feeling of the ghost entering his body.) Already there something didn't seem to feel right as he did it. Going through the obese dogs body felt hard, and he had been going through some hard things in the past. Stuff like wooden walls, stone floors, and even the six feet of thick earth that he had been buried under was all things that he could go through without any problems because he was a ghost. But the wobbling, multilayered fat of this humongous pet dog actually gave him some resistance. It made him fell...tired?
Still he didn't think much of it and made his way to the absolute middle of it all. The stomach sack. Once inside he could see just how large even it was. Given that a stomach sack usually is just about a few inches wide, Scooby's had instead been growing to be the several feet in diameter! "No wonder it is able to contain so much food for the dog to store." Dracul thought as he looked around. It was already halfway filled with the junk food that he was currently eating, and even though some of it was getting digested there was still entering more food then what was getting taken care of. Even though it was a bit cramped for the moment, there where still some room for Dracul to move around in.
Feeling that he has seen enough of how things works inside animal bodies Dracul decided to continue his plan to scare the dog, and was making his way to go through the "roof" of the stomach room when he noticed he couldn't! Trying again to push himself through the stomach walls still gave him the same result. He had had some trouble getting in there, but now he couldn't even get out?! "This doesn't make any sense!" Dracul thought, as he tried to make his powers work. As a ghost there shouldn't be anything that could stop him from phasing through anything, and now he couldn't leave this place. "What is going to happen to me now? Am I suppose to live here for all eternity?" Dracul asked himself annoyingly, but the real answer to that question would be much, much worse.
All of the sudden Dracul felt a strange feeling spread across his body. Something that felt a bit "itchy" and it only got bigger and harder for every second. It was something that the ghost hadn't experienced in a long time.
Pain.
He was feeling pain, but why? What was it about this situation that could lead to him feeling pain?...Then it suddenly hit him like a pile of brick landing on his head. He was getting digested by the dog! He didn't know how it was possible, but somehow he was not able to go through the dog's stomach walls, and the dog's stomach juices was able to hurt his ghostly skin.
This was all starting to look more and more like the ghost's worst kind of nightmare come true. The one thing he thought he was going to be able to do once he became undead was to just not die again. He thought that once he left the his living life he was going to be able to live forever in the after life. But now here he was. Inside a of slobbering, greasy, huge pig of a dog's insanely large stomach, and getting digested like he was a part of it's meal.
The thought of that this was how it would all possibly end for him made him try even harder getting out, with him punching the walls surrounding him, and even shouting out "HELP!" as loud as he could. He didn't care that he was giving away to the dog that he was there, he just wanted to live. But sadly Scooby had been totally unaware of Dracul's present all the time, and giving the thickness of his stomach's walls he wasn't even able to hear or feel the ghost's desperate attempts of reaching him. The only thing he felt was once the ghost had entered his stomach (And somehow made his ghostly body "whole" instead of transparent.) it felt like he suddenly has had three extra burgers and two extra pizzas stuffed into him. (Not that he was complaining over that of course.)
As the damage the juices gave only got worse, and as the room was getting more and more filled with food Dracul realized that he wasn't going to make it. He was going to become digested. And as he could feel himself starting to lose his conscious and entering a second deep sleep he thought about how he literally had ended up here by doing the dog's job for him. The dog hadn't even known he existed, and he had forced himself into the dogs stomach by his own force. "In hindsight this didn't seem like the most smartest plan I could have made to scare that dog." Dracul though before closing his eyes for the last time.
As Dracul was getting digested Scooby continued eating like it was nothing. Except for him having less space in his stomach to store food nothing was slowing down his pace. After half an hour of constant eating Scooby finally was done with the whole thing, and it shows. Not only on his even more then usual bloated stomach, but also in the big mess of wrap hamburger papers and empty pizza boxes and soda cans covering the dinning table and floor. Feeling like he didn't want to be back once Jerry came home Scooby Doo quickly got on his feet, (Having to first find ground for his legs to touch.) before waddling back towards the entrance to meet his friends.
As he came back to the staircase next to the main entrance he saw the rest of the gang conveniently making their way down there at the same time. Looking at their dog friend they could easily guess what he had done. Even with his new bulky figure they could still see that he had packed on some pounds since last time they saw him. (Mostly by that his big round stomach usually stay above ground thanks to the new length of his legs, but now it was brushing the floor as he walked.)
"Well I couldn't find any clues showing that there would be anything supernatural in this house." Velma said.
"And I never saw any spying neighbours, business men wanting to buy the land the place is standing on, or any other usual suspects that turns out to be the once doing it." Fred added.
"Scooby at least looks like he managed to find where the kitchen was." Shaggy said, sounding a bit jealous of his dog friend for getting all the food this time.
"Speaking of which, did you find anything ghostly on your solo trip Scooby?" Daphne asked.
Scooby was about to answer when he felt a burp coming up. Giving said burp let out a bit of a ghostly ectoplasm, (That only was visible for a small second before disappearing quickly.) and Scooby afterwards blushing a little and saying "Rnope, rnothing at rall."
Scooby-Dooby-Doo!
Category Story / Vore
Species Dog (Other)
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Nice job on the story. Looks like Scooby is now the scariest thing to all ghosts and monsters. Now if there can just be a mystery at an all-you-can-eat buffet or the scooby snax factory and the monster is something he'd find edible and delicious he'd be too huge even to ride in the Mystery Machine.
Well, the biggest thing I saw was that you were telling a lot of stuff rather than showing it. Plenty of writers usually have a habit of doing this at first. You should not explain to the readers something, but convey it through the actions and words of the characters.
For example instead of this line:
The first case that they had got was a pretty simple one. Some lonely person living in a big haunted house had said that he had seen a ghost haunting it. Pretty standard stuff for them.
You could perhaps do something like this.
"Been a while since we got a case this unremarkable," commented Fred. "Well, as it goes for unmasking ghosts anyway. Eccentric lonely person living in a big creepy house that is apparently haunted. It doesn't get more basic than that."
Another thing I'd recommend is separating separating paragraphs with multiple characters speaking so it is clearer than one character finishes talking and another starts to speak.
Dracul's origin doesn't seem to have much to do with the story besides giving him background, but beyond that it doesn't serve much other purpose and wouldn't really be needed or as I mentioned before about showing rather than telling it would make more sense for the gang to be told the legend about Dracul so they know about it otherwise only the readers only ever get this information and none of the characters do so there is no point to it.
And this may be more a reader's preference, but adding more to Scooby's binge is always a plus. More food, more description, and more talk about his weight is always enjoyable and if that is the main focus on your story it should definitely be filling, but always leave the reader's hungry for more.
For example instead of this line:
The first case that they had got was a pretty simple one. Some lonely person living in a big haunted house had said that he had seen a ghost haunting it. Pretty standard stuff for them.
You could perhaps do something like this.
"Been a while since we got a case this unremarkable," commented Fred. "Well, as it goes for unmasking ghosts anyway. Eccentric lonely person living in a big creepy house that is apparently haunted. It doesn't get more basic than that."
Another thing I'd recommend is separating separating paragraphs with multiple characters speaking so it is clearer than one character finishes talking and another starts to speak.
Dracul's origin doesn't seem to have much to do with the story besides giving him background, but beyond that it doesn't serve much other purpose and wouldn't really be needed or as I mentioned before about showing rather than telling it would make more sense for the gang to be told the legend about Dracul so they know about it otherwise only the readers only ever get this information and none of the characters do so there is no point to it.
And this may be more a reader's preference, but adding more to Scooby's binge is always a plus. More food, more description, and more talk about his weight is always enjoyable and if that is the main focus on your story it should definitely be filling, but always leave the reader's hungry for more.
The concept of the ghost being trapped was unexpected, and it was quite a calm and nicely wrapped up story you don't see that often with vore stories (at least, I haven't). If I had to critique it would be noting grammatical mistakes and it felt a bit flat in the style of writing (e.g. a lack of emotional development or emotive imagery), but other than that it was a pleasant read
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